rate_review Reviews

Well he had me fooled! Scary, I found it funny that they adopted a girl. She's definitely gonna be warped.

I know I just reviewed in response to the previous chapter but I had forgotten some very important praise and with this new installment I simply must divulge. Lucius' character in this story has been the driving instrumental force in the plotline, and in this last chapter you really capture the growth as a minor antagonist which he so very much deserves. I love that Harry and Draco are not the only multidimentional characters you pay attention to. You are very in tune with what your stories need and it's really something wonderful to watch the natural evolution of your writing. I savored the dilema Lucius faced in this story particularly because he was easy to relate to, like a father or uncle caught trying to do the right thing for their family. It's one thin to harness the Malfoy ego and make it do tricks for you every other page, but quite another acomplishment to break it down in its rawest form and expose the human hiding behind it in all their naked vulnerability. The generational gap between the Malfoy men is breached for a moment in time and that is a very powerful development to add. Magnifica.

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That was really sweet
I cant wait to see what happens next????

update soon?

GO Draco! Oh my he is going to declare his love how sweet...can't wait for the next chapter.

WHAT? One last chapter left, Noooooooo! I will miss the boys.

Very cool. The way Harry gave Draco his boxers was glorious . Heart-breaking, though. Very well written. And the scene with Lucius was pretty good, too.

This is one of the stories that I look most foward to updates on. Thank you.

YESSSS!!!!!! (Throws fists in the air)

But what about the Malfoy heir! Shouldn't Lucius be exploding right about now?

I have let too much time pass since my las review, and so as always I open with hopes that my apology will make up for my constant lurking nature. Its seem foolish of me to have let an entire year go by without an encouraging word for your accomplishments, and I am here to remedy that effective immediately. Ah,

Of course he will make the right choice...
He has too....
Right?
RIGHT?
Update soon KP.