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person ThePinkLady
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! Lucius is quite the character, paying a spy to stop Harry and Draco from getting it on? LOL I REALLY want to see how the spy is planning on stopping that, should be priceless! Draco is just adorable hehehe studdering and all. Can't wait for more :)
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I should have known that lunch was going to be
another cliff hanger lol I was curious about Mattie,
the mysterious woman on the lift....was she really the spy? lol just
a thought.
Update soon?????
So need chapter 11
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 11!!! Ron is going to regret this!!!
person Nikte
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ow, Draco is so cute in this chapter, I wonder how long he will stay that way. lol And what is Lucius thinking, didn
person SP777
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

Now that was delightful, it was like watching a boy on a playground trying
to ask the prettiest girl..'will you be my valentine'? Excuse the comparison...

Too bad the idiot is going to screw it up.
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh how lovely, I love how you making Draco suffer and making him feel insecure about himself. Keep them coming I'm loving it.
person Juana13
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, i really hope draco realizes his feelings for harry soon!!
hope this is a happy ending story : )
and what is lucius up to hiring a spy...
hmmm....
he's gotten serious.
i just do hope draco doesnt hurt harry badly in this story and drive him away somehow.
was draco's dream foreshadow...?
so many questions!!!
hahahaha
well, i really hope you update soon.
cant wait for the next chapter!
big time looking foward to it!! : )
person Tree802
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! I laughed out loud at the "desperate times call for...spies" line, among the other funny parts. Draco talking to himself in an elevator...classic! Oh yes...boy's got it BAD! Love it!
person Janice2k
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know I really like Lucius as a good guy.
Thanks for the update.
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very Good i cant wait to see what cuteness draco gets into next