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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. You're the first D/s story that I've read on this site that actually captured the D/s aspect and not just the BDSM. Its refreshing and I'm loving every chapter that I've read. I can't wait to read more. Absolutely fantastic writing!
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it please more updates thanks
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviewed in a bit so I hope you don't mind if my comments cover that last four chapters. Your writing is amazing and I can't get over how often you post chapters. I am really enjoying this story.
*The D/s conversation in chapter 7 was a bit surprising. Obviously from your warnings and previous chapters, I knew this was a theme. However, I didn't expect it to come up in an actual D/s arrangement. I'm not one to ship Snape/Hermione often, so I'm hoping that while they continue their relationship, it won't too fluffy.
*I really liked how he reassured her that her desires weren't deviant or immoral. The parallel between her sexual feelings and her intelligence was very ineresting.
*So he is sleeping with Taffy, but not in a D/s capacity. Snape has the best of both worlds with the two girls, doesn't he? :)
*Again, I love how he continues to seduce her with his voice and his words. He manages to turn her on by calling her a slut one moment, then praising her as a good girl the next.
*"When at last the spanking ceased, the spanking hand moved seamlessly to fingering pleasure, seeking out and finding her clitoris, and she was almost disappointed as, within seconds, the powerful pulse of her orgasm ripped through her, moving her from crying to sobbing." One single line and I love how it conveys her emotions. From cleansing spanking to powerful oragasm. I love how he helps her let go of everything.
*Snape controlling her pleasure while in her mind was...wow. And the last half of Chapter 11 was amazing too. Merlin, what filthy erotic words was he whispering in her ear?
Such an interesting dynamic between the two of them. I like how despite all that has happened, Snape still remains somewhat of an enigma to Hermione. Each time she thinks she has him figured out, he surprises her. She become comfortable and lax, he punishes her. She puts her trust in him and gets mind blowing pleasure. I am loving how this story is progressing.
*The D/s conversation in chapter 7 was a bit surprising. Obviously from your warnings and previous chapters, I knew this was a theme. However, I didn't expect it to come up in an actual D/s arrangement. I'm not one to ship Snape/Hermione often, so I'm hoping that while they continue their relationship, it won't too fluffy.
*I really liked how he reassured her that her desires weren't deviant or immoral. The parallel between her sexual feelings and her intelligence was very ineresting.
*So he is sleeping with Taffy, but not in a D/s capacity. Snape has the best of both worlds with the two girls, doesn't he? :)
*Again, I love how he continues to seduce her with his voice and his words. He manages to turn her on by calling her a slut one moment, then praising her as a good girl the next.
*"When at last the spanking ceased, the spanking hand moved seamlessly to fingering pleasure, seeking out and finding her clitoris, and she was almost disappointed as, within seconds, the powerful pulse of her orgasm ripped through her, moving her from crying to sobbing." One single line and I love how it conveys her emotions. From cleansing spanking to powerful oragasm. I love how he helps her let go of everything.
*Snape controlling her pleasure while in her mind was...wow. And the last half of Chapter 11 was amazing too. Merlin, what filthy erotic words was he whispering in her ear?
Such an interesting dynamic between the two of them. I like how despite all that has happened, Snape still remains somewhat of an enigma to Hermione. Each time she thinks she has him figured out, he surprises her. She become comfortable and lax, he punishes her. She puts her trust in him and gets mind blowing pleasure. I am loving how this story is progressing.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A new chapter? What a great thing to see first thing in the morning! :)
*"His fingertips stroked over her cheek, tucking a hank of bushy hair behind her ear" I think this is the first time in a super long time when someon actually got Hermione's hair right. Way too often Snape would be brushing an "errant curl" behind her ear. I love how you remain faithful to canon descriptions for both of them.
*"Swallowing her disappointment as well as she could, she sat up, too, sitting like an upright wooden puppet upon his suddenly inhospitable knee." I adore your writing and ths line is a perfect example why. And I love the comparison of her as a puppet. He has complete control over her.
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*"His fingertips stroked over her cheek, tucking a hank of bushy hair behind her ear" I think this is the first time in a super long time when someon actually got Hermione's hair right. Way too often Snape would be brushing an "errant curl" behind her ear. I love how you remain faithful to canon descriptions for both of them.
*"Swallowing her disappointment as well as she could, she sat up, too, sitting like an upright wooden puppet upon his suddenly inhospitable knee." I adore your writing and ths line is a perfect example why. And I love the comparison of her as a puppet. He has complete control over her.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How can he do this to Hermione and openly date other women? It's just outrageous! I like her posessiveness. And your describtions of their "quiet moments" are great...
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmh, this one was niiice!
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well this one wasn't fair. He implies that he'd go to the prostitute after her, cheats her of her bet win and makes her feel bad. That's just misuse of power and abuse, both physical and emotional He might have punished her for braking one rule, but he cares nothing about her, only about himself. This is not submission, it's an abusive relationship.
I hoped he would hear her out, punish her for her mistake, heal her and give her what he wanted. This way, I'm just angry and annoyed.
I hoped he would hear her out, punish her for her mistake, heal her and give her what he wanted. This way, I'm just angry and annoyed.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmh... Yummy, a gift with dual use, both of them introduced by the sexiest man in the HP-World... No, not Lucius, silly! He is too spoiled and whiny to be the sexiest man!
Thanks for the fast update!
Thanks for the fast update!
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a guess on what's in the little box! I hope I'm right! heheh
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An interesting story. I have actually stumbled upon this website and am enjoying myself reading them