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June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would much like to see another chapter or two updated here, as FF.net has been talking of deleting many stories of sexual nature, I've moved all of mine to this site. This is my favorite story, and I would hate to see it deleted. I just thought to let you know.
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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What's wrong, dear? I'll gladly continue reading on FFNet...
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is like an addiction! I keep returning to it in hopes of an update, and, if there are none, I simply reread it from the beginning. It's beautifully done.
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story, thanks for sharing. Please update soon!
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
anxiously awaiting the next installment... please post soon!
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying this story and checking anxiously for updates. I particularly loved Chapter 14, the way in which their secret world begins to spill over into daily life outside of Snape's office- I adored the scene in the storage closet. And Hermione's understanding in Chapter 15 that the submissive is not entirely powerless. Incredibly sexy writing! More please!
** WesleyY7, re Number 14: google Lucid Dream Number 14, I think this is the toy being referred to
** WesleyY7, re Number 14: google Lucid Dream Number 14, I think this is the toy being referred to
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 13 and 14 in such quick succession? What a wonderful treat!
I find it so interesting that this fic is told completely from Hermione's view thus having influence on your readers' inference of Snape's feelings and actions. Those who like the pair are enjoying the story and hope Snape has feelings for Hermione and will eventually enter into a healthier relationship. While I love the character of Snape, I've never been able to read stories romantic stories with him and Hermione. I always felt he viewed her with distaste and was annoyed by her know-it-all attitude. Yet, I love this story because I'm reading it as him getting off on controlling and humiliating her, even if it's just in his presence. He's taking pleasure in slowly and utterly destroying her. I guess what I'm trying to say, and I hope this makes some sort of sense, is it's a testament to what a wonderful writer you are and how great this story is because you can have readers who have polor opposite views on the pair and have them still enjoy this fic.
*"Hermione felt herself relax infinitesimally. This was an intellectual discussion. This was well within her comfort zone" That's so Hermione! Comfortable with the brain, confused by the heart at times.
*Oh crap! Snivelling? And on her knees at his feet, begging? She is in so deep! And he can view all of this with a "dispassionate" disinterest?! And he will still continue to see Tabby (who is she anyway?), just not on the same night. Poor thing.
*Ah, Hermione and her book. Hmmm...Master Maximus and t? Is t Tabby? And yet again he mentions finding her another Dominant once she graduates. Will he follow through? Ohhh, who would he chose?
*The final part of this chapter was amazing. He again remains completely clothed while she is naked, both phycially and emotionally. "It is time for you to learn how your breasts can bring pleasure to your Dominant." Merlin, the man continues to turn her (and me) on with his words. And transitioning from calling her a slut to a dirty filty girl to a good girl...he knows which buttons to push!
*"Nearly three days without an orgasm... It had been very difficult for her." LOL! Aw, poor Hermione! And only she would get completely involved her class assignment and forget about her sex mission.
*"something in him seemed to break" Ah, so he's not totally unaffected. The darkened closet scene was hot. And he thinks she's "remarkable". Hmmm.
*So, you mentioned in Chapter 13 that you were behind on answering reviews. I'm assuming this might mean reviews from other sites you've posted at as it doesn't appear you're answering here. Which is totally fine, of course! I was just hoping you, or someone else, could explain Number 14? You mentioned it before and I've seen a few rave about it elsewhere, yet Google isn't a big help.
I find it so interesting that this fic is told completely from Hermione's view thus having influence on your readers' inference of Snape's feelings and actions. Those who like the pair are enjoying the story and hope Snape has feelings for Hermione and will eventually enter into a healthier relationship. While I love the character of Snape, I've never been able to read stories romantic stories with him and Hermione. I always felt he viewed her with distaste and was annoyed by her know-it-all attitude. Yet, I love this story because I'm reading it as him getting off on controlling and humiliating her, even if it's just in his presence. He's taking pleasure in slowly and utterly destroying her. I guess what I'm trying to say, and I hope this makes some sort of sense, is it's a testament to what a wonderful writer you are and how great this story is because you can have readers who have polor opposite views on the pair and have them still enjoy this fic.
*"Hermione felt herself relax infinitesimally. This was an intellectual discussion. This was well within her comfort zone" That's so Hermione! Comfortable with the brain, confused by the heart at times.
*Oh crap! Snivelling? And on her knees at his feet, begging? She is in so deep! And he can view all of this with a "dispassionate" disinterest?! And he will still continue to see Tabby (who is she anyway?), just not on the same night. Poor thing.
*Ah, Hermione and her book. Hmmm...Master Maximus and t? Is t Tabby? And yet again he mentions finding her another Dominant once she graduates. Will he follow through? Ohhh, who would he chose?
*The final part of this chapter was amazing. He again remains completely clothed while she is naked, both phycially and emotionally. "It is time for you to learn how your breasts can bring pleasure to your Dominant." Merlin, the man continues to turn her (and me) on with his words. And transitioning from calling her a slut to a dirty filty girl to a good girl...he knows which buttons to push!
*"Nearly three days without an orgasm... It had been very difficult for her." LOL! Aw, poor Hermione! And only she would get completely involved her class assignment and forget about her sex mission.
*"something in him seemed to break" Ah, so he's not totally unaffected. The darkened closet scene was hot. And he thinks she's "remarkable". Hmmm.
*So, you mentioned in Chapter 13 that you were behind on answering reviews. I'm assuming this might mean reviews from other sites you've posted at as it doesn't appear you're answering here. Which is totally fine, of course! I was just hoping you, or someone else, could explain Number 14? You mentioned it before and I've seen a few rave about it elsewhere, yet Google isn't a big help.
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! If you can get more chapters out this weekend I say yes, please! I hope Severus eventually realizes Hermione's feelings (though maybe he already does) and returns them. These two give me tingly feelings in my, well you know where... LOL!
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just about the hottest fic Ive read in forever. Thanks so much.