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by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person savigar
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Sev, don't give up so easily!

Very much enjoying this, so far...
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm - still not sure what Hermione did exactly to Lucius but he's more subdued. She really is a brilliant little witch. And Harry's with Blaise - yummy.
person chyara
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uh oh....

I love SS/HG stories as well as LM/HG. I hope she doesn't break Sev's heart if this is an LMHG story. Or they could be a 3 some...lol I love those too.
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought that punishing Lucius with living through someone else's torture was inspired! I was also side swiped by the sudden sexual overtones of the relationship between Severus and Hermione. To go a chapter and a half with no inkling that their relationship was even remotley intimate made it that much more of a surprise (the good kind - that is my favourite pairing). Were Hermione and Severus involved while she was still dating Ron?
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far xxxx

Cannot wait ch 3 xxxx
person Ithilwen
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This does show promise...

I wonder maybe some of those memories were hers or someone close to her?

And what did Snape and Draco talk about that ended in tears?
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is a dirty girl isn't she???? Lucius is so naughty.
person VoraciousReader
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooked! Call me fish, and reel me in. More when you can, please.