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At the beginning of chapter 4, Hermione is awakened by yelling. I *think* people with hearing issues would normally just hear muffled sounds, but I could be lying. The scene with Ron is a hoot though. Snape being his snarky self to Hermione after the Ron/Hermione showdown is a hoot.

The Draco/Harry scene at the beach where Hermione doesn't ID herself is cute. I like Hermione messing with Harry's head slightly.

"you're bigger than Severus!" *giggle* I like that Harry doesn't realize that Lucius and Hermione are fucking when Harry and Draco accidentally walk in on them.
Oh, the new assistant being a force to reckon with and making Snape do things that are good for him is also amusing.

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What the fuck? I literally said that while reading this chapter. Lucius and Hermione must have some special connection to be casually talking about spending ever after together without being anything more than affectionate acquaintances. Did I miss a chapter? This is moving way too fast! I really have loved your story up until this chapter blindsided me. Your characterizations are truly genuine and believable. I like the alternate universe you're building and want to see all of the minor character's issues played out. I like Hermione's vigilante streak (why did she just go after Malfoy?)and her "arrangement" with Severus.

Chapters 1-3: This tale just sucked me in from the first paragraphs. It

Chapters 4-6: OMG, Ron is such a self-centered, immature fool. Molly must have lost the ability to parent after she had Bill and Charley. The rest of the Weasley clan got weirder and weirder as the kids went on. Perhaps there was oxygen depletion during her pregnancy

Chapters 7-9: Sweet! Lucius and Hermione had time to themselves. But coming back to Italy to be ambushed by the Weasleys

Bloody beautiful. I will never be able to get enough of your words. I was like Hermione's oral skills on this one, and took it all in at once. That's why this was the only review from me. But I wanted to tell you that it was brilliant, you are brilliant. I truly enjoyed every little piece of it. It was wonderful. I am assuming that she never revealed to Lucius whose memories he suffered through. Thank you ever so much for sharing your considerable talent with us. I was extremely entertained, and right at a point when I really felt the need to escape from real life for a moment too. It is appreciated.

~Mia

totally loved it