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for The Heart\'s Desire

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You would think that being raised as a muggle, she would understand the inherent dangers of drinking and anything (driving, spellcasting, whatever). Tsk Tsk Hermione! Sometimes I wonder if she actually has a lick of common sense amongst all those brains.

At least this scenario didn't end up as horribly as it could have been. Glad to see it work out for Hermione in the end.

Looking forward to your next work!
MHS
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now thats how a relationship is supposed to be like.....lots of mind blowing sex, home cooked meals, ect........in theory. I liked your theory ^.^
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a funny and sweet little one-shot. I loved it!

Tiffany
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was really good. I mean really, really good!! I loved every minute of it.
person KellyJCR
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How could anyone not love that! I was in hysterics with the thought of a nearly naked Hermione falling on Sevs desk in front of a student. Always worth the read when you have Severus involved (hell who am I kidding, your stuff is always worth the read and it never disappoints!) Well done!!
person VoraciousReader
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Five stars! Funny, sad, empathetic, passionate, hopeful, and a flood of other adjectives I can't think of at the moment. absolutely loved it.
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. It was so freaking hot!
person carha
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been looking every day for your next post. I liked this story very much, and it's my favorite pair! Please don't take it down. I am going to be always on the watch for whatever your wonderful mind pops out next!
person daisyMaeEvans
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is lovely, dear! I'm so glad you put it up here. Thanks so much for sharing!
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