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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really liked this, a brilliant story, very well written and with a excellent plot. I am always happy to see a story written by you, and I was not dissepointed!
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You can't take this down. It was wonderful. Gives those of us who wonder if there is anyone out there for us a little bit of hope that it isn't just fairy tale princesses who are happy in the end. Another wonderful effort that is truly appreciated.
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yehhhhhhhh Snapes Goddess returns.... and what a belter. I really enjoyed this, please don't take it down. Lovely and fluffy, just what I needed. Thank you.
Lu
Lu
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love your works as always Goddess, a very nice before sleep bedtime story!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore it!! It was sweet and a bit funny in the how the hell did this happen sense...but best of all it made me smile!
I love a happy Sev and Mione!!
Brilliant work!!
Love and Hugs!
Lady B*
I love a happy Sev and Mione!!
Brilliant work!!
Love and Hugs!
Lady B*
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i LOVED it!!!! i laughed sooo hard when she was like 'oh GODS.... she mouth raped him' ha ha that was great i like that you wrote hermione a little snarky in the beginning... and poor severus i just wanted to give him a hug i am glad that he succumbed to hermione of course he did not have too much of a choice.... fabulous job... ok i am on to read his kiss then probably something in the way she moves again... that was after all the fic that got me started with ya!!!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a funny, light hearted story! I love how you had her popping in on him in all kinds of situations. Your vulnerable Snape is a great character. Loved It!!!!!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I alway love your work. But I think I have a a new all time favorite line "knee walking drunk but that was just semantics"! That is just priceless. Thanks for sharing your gift.
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww...please don't take it down! I think this was a great story! Cute, yet sultry! You certainly have a talent for writing creative, never boring stories!
The only thing I may critique is that Severus' change of heart to finally accept what Hermione was offering seemed a bit rushed. How exactly did he feel jilted before? It wasn't quite clear to me.
Other than that, great piece of writing! Thank you for all your contributions to fanfiction!
The only thing I may critique is that Severus' change of heart to finally accept what Hermione was offering seemed a bit rushed. How exactly did he feel jilted before? It wasn't quite clear to me.
Other than that, great piece of writing! Thank you for all your contributions to fanfiction!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
It's so great to see you posting again. I really liked this story, a new twist so to speak. I do so hope to see more soon.
It's so great to see you posting again. I really liked this story, a new twist so to speak. I do so hope to see more soon.