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Awwwww!! Warm and fuzziness abounds!! That was very sweet. Yes, spellcasting when drunk is a *very* bad idea. LOL. But not in this case. I loved how she kept popping in on him everytime she thought of him. I laughed out loud, very hard when I read the line, 'Oh God, she mouth raped him!' You are extremely funny. I also forgot to mention in another review, (see, there's that downside I was talking about) a line that I thought was funny, the Lucius and Hermione PWP, "Fuckfight". Brilliant term. Loved the popping in when there was a horny teenager present, and so like a teenaged boy to state the completely obvious...."Professor, there's a naked girl on your desk" I wished Severus had said in that snarky, snide tone of his, "Oh really, I hadn't noticed." LOL. Well, anywho, fabulous as always my dear, but as I have spent most of the day sitting like a zombie reading your stories, I must take a break, life calls in the form of a hyper toddler. ^.^

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This is hot and very sweet. I love the idea of a spell that throws them back together. He would have to believe she isn't playing a joke after awhile. Poor Severus that he feels so unworthy of love. He always seems that way. Wonderful story. -Clare

Very sweet ending to this one. I loved how they got together here.

Oh my, how on earth did I ever miss this little gem? I usually check on AFF regularly and am always on the lookout for new posts by you but somehow I missed this one. This was a wonderful little one shot, I loved it, please don't even think about taking it down. I loved the way she kept popping in on him wherever he was, just goes to show she couldn't get him out of her mind.

This was so sweet! This was my first pairing, before I sailed on the Dramione ship...all the more to have Severus for myself, of course! :D I think you've really drawn Severus as I see him. Having to tamp down his feelings and hope for so many years. And he's so happy at the end...even if it's all on the inside. Well done. :D

I liked this a lot. :)

What do you mean 'It may not stay up"? Don't you dare take it down, it's now my second fav fic of yours after The Bond. I know, I know... I haven't reviewed in an age and the first time I do, I have a whinge. Well as a huge fan of you I get to whinge.

Really loved this! The situations she 'popped' into were great! And Snape's response to it...so very...well, Snapish!
Well done~
Gwaelinn

I love the kid who sees a nearly nekkid Hermione on his Headmaster's desk and wants to stick around. That was frickin' hilarious. And Hermione just 'popping' in wherever... fantastic. Especially the shower, even if it just prolonged the UST. And when he caved in, that was pitch perfect.

What I liked best about this though was that it was a full and complete thought and developed story. When it ended, I was happy and not ready to whine, 'what happens next,' like far too many one-shots. Thank you for that.

Don't take it down! It's cute, it's H O T. I love seduction and so much written anymore is more Slam, Bam... The idea of a drunken-cast spell, and dropping out of the ether is a good one.