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ahhhh, that was really good
:D
I cannot wait until Pansy teaches Hermione how to cum
And I love how you made it so that Pansy and Draco both want Hermione
and it is not just hermione and draco
thanks for updating sooo fast
cant wait to read more!
<3

I just simply love it.

*yay* new chapter and so fast...thanks for continuing! :)
Can't wait for the next chapters...

imagine, if underneath her disipline and innocents is a sucubus that these slytherins couldn't control? and if so how far would or could they go to keep her (for themselves of course)? Besides do you really see these two sharing with others? would it be so far fetched if this were planned all the long and not by these cunning, coveted slytherins? just a thought or two

I really like this. It's strange because I usually go for F/M/M threesomes rather than M/F/F threesomes, but you seem to make it work, and I can't wait to read more. Pretty much anything with Draco/Hermione makes me happy, throw someone else in there (Harry, Blaise, Charlie, Pansy...) and it is that much better. Looking forward to more (and I know how you feel about being a broke college student as I'm in the exact same boat).

~BooBoo

Another wonderful chapter has grabbed my interest! A word of warning...I often tend to ramble in my reviews, so I hope you don't mind! :)

Hermione racing from the scene only to lay huddled in her bed was a nice touch. She may have the knowledge, but the reality of it seemed to have frightened her because of how it makes her feel. I liked how she withheld from pleasuring herself to gain control of her feelings. I got the feeling she thought she was better than those two "sex fiends". Hermione dear, you just got off watching them. By your definition, wouldn't that make you a fiend too? (Why yes, I am asking questions of a ficitonal character in a review.) She forgot to button her blouse *and* left her knickers?! Oh my girl, you've already lost and the game hasn't even begun.

Your Draco and Pansy are wondeful. They seem to actually enjoy and like one another. Pansy is not an annoying cow, but Draco's equal. And I adored how she turned the tables on him! Dominating him with her own dirty talk and Granger's knickers.

"One of those desires, among such things as handcuffs and exhibitionism, happened to be Hogwart's Virgin Queen. Hermione Granger was practically innocence personified, and that drew both Pansy and Draco like nothing but each other had ever done." and "Both had had more than a few fantasies of 'spoiling' Miss Perfect." And Pansy wanting to desecrate (perfect word!) Granger? I cannot wait for the two Slytherins to dominate and teach our lass. I'm sure Hermione will more than likely be able to hold her own once she learns the ropes (smirk), but I'd love to see a "Wait, do I really want to do this?" sub!Hermione at first.

What shall I say? Yes it did - and yet, NO! That was entirely too short! You really want to keep us in line, don't you? I'm all mushy right now!

Threesomes are sexy - at least in my imagination - in real life they can turn into work (not to talk about jealousy)... I mean it's kond of hard to concentrate on two people. It gets so much more complicated when there's more than two people involved... Nevertheless, THIS definitely IS SEXY!

So this is my first venture into this sort of a pairing (M/F/F) EXCEPT for a one-shot I read with the same pairing a little while ago, and really liked. Suffice it to say, I really like your story too (cos I think with this sort of pairing/story, it could really go either way, and a lot of it depends on the writing and the storyline, which I think you've done well), and the possibilities of where it could go!!

I vote that this becomes a full story, not a PWP!! ....just thought I'd let you know. ^_^

Now, I know you just updated yesterday, buuuttt......:D

Oh, and the links you had at the end didn't work. :(

Till next time!!

Damn! That was hot! The dirty talk was the thing that really did me in. What I wouldn't give to be either Hermione or Pansy right now..sigh..
I have read a couple threesomes before but mostly F/M/M all with Hermione and Draco with another guy, either Blaise or even Harry. I'm interested to see how this goes as this will be one of the first M/F/F that has really caught my attention..
About the female ejaculation, I personally wouldn't believe it if I didn't see it before. I wonder how they do it..Anyway, keep the imaginative juices flowing and update soon!! c:

love it!!!!! please write more! soon!