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Lol on your filling in the holes of everyone's knowledge...and yes you were correct in your ahem dissertation on female ejaculation...I have seen some interesting and rather weird videos...including one woman who could spray like a Super Soaker...It was...a little scary lol. But excellent smut! Brava and keep it up! What does the Pansy in your mind look like? Everyone always makes her so unattractive and unappealing. And I like the exhibitionism aspect...very hot!

While I've never been a big fan of pansy, I love her in this! I can't wait to see all three of them together... ;)

First off I'd like to say I'm absolutely in LOVE with this story! Usually I'm a fan of F/M/M but this one managed to catch my eye and am happy to say this is the first M/F/F story I've read, so congrats! I'm usually pretty picky with pairings/groupings so the fact you managed to catch my attention is really saying something lol. Not only is the story really well written, but it's very informative, too. I certainly didn't know about female ejaculation until now! And then the very important fact that the whole thing is incredibly sexy. I've never been with another girl before, but I definately got turned on reading this. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm hooked!


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Totally glad you love my revies because I love this story! Of course, now you've put all this pressure on me, so I hope this review is all you hoped it would be. ;)

Great Salazar's Ghost! (or insert another expletive here because my brain is mush!) I loved this chapter. Having it told from Draco's point of view, with him hiding in a corner taking note of both the girls' actions and reactions was lovely.

"Draco was utterly enthralled with the porn playing out in front of him." Again with the great opening line. And we're jumping right into where we left off. Yes! I've always imagined Pansy to have a husky voice, and having her seduce Hermione with dirty talk using said voice was awesome! (""Good girl, Granger. Very good girl" huskily said is also hot, hot, hot!) And I loved that Pansy's demand for her to come for her is what pushed Hermione over the edge.

"He was so close, so close. When he finally did come, it was going to be fucking incredible." Oh Draco, how we love you. Dearest Malfoy, I cannot wait to see what you do with Granger. And I loved how the majority of the time Draco and Pansy referred to her as Granger rather than Hermione.

"Draco rolled his eyes. This was about to get more technical than he was going to like, he knew, and he looked down at his erect cock exasperatedly." LOL! I did think the explanation was a bit technical and took me out of the story a bit. (Although I did learn a lot, thanks!) I was surprised Hermione was able to do this their first time together. However, it was very hot and I loved how Pansy made it almost a lesson and challenged Hermione to do it.

Glad they were finished before the charm was due to go off though! "Draco & Pansy discuss a few things - and perhaps a bit more..." I'm very interested in the "a bit more". :)

Oh my god... so hot I can't wait for Draco to get involved.

Interesting very interesting

Yeah, another chapter and it's HOT!!! ... Consider me addicted!

Can't wait to read what happens when Hermione and Draco get together...duhu...:)

And yes, it IS fun *lol*

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Jenn

The only thing that comes to me after finishing this chapter was WOOOOOOWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! LOL Hot, spicy and instructive... LOL

hot? bloody scorching!! Wow, I do love it when things get a little dirtier, it makes everything so much more fun! Ok, so I was secretly hoping Draco might take a more active role but still this was so good. Hot, girl, well done. I can't wait to see what happens next and how Hermione feels.

I have just discovered this fic and I must say the trio is this fic is soooo hot xxxx

When reading the chapters I felt myself get hot and bothered that I wanted to join in xxx

Anyway if you are looking for a beta, I'll be happy to help xxx