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Oh do tell us what Draoc is going to do to that insufferable moron? I even disliked McLaggen in the books! What a jerk. Or maybe Hermione could let Draco see her hex the prat on her own and relax a little? More, please, whenever you are ready.

glad to hear you're sticking with this story until its finished. I have to say this veela fic is unique because he seems to take on a beastly persona in his inner dialogue. anyway most veela fics are trash but this one rocks. thanks!

All I can say is "Yay". :) Thanks so much for updating so soon and I will follow this story till the end. :D Great job and keep up the good work.

Wonderful chapter as usual. I liked that you included the scenes from half blood prince (Draco crashing the party and all that). I also love how you don't shy away from writing explicit material. I, on the other hand, can't write a good porn scene at all. Any pointers? Update soon.

Oh...you ever thought of co-writing a story with other authors on this site? For instance, you start with a 1st chapter...whatever DM/HG plot you want. I, then would write chapter two the way I see the story going...then some other author would continue with the third chapter and so on...

What do you think of that? Think it's possiable?

Respectfully yours,

Olga LaLa

I am imagining that a library sex scene is coming up soon...CAAAAAAAAAAN'T WAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT!!!

Oooohhhhh, Cormack is soooo busted! You kick his ass Draco!

i love this fic and i am soooo glad that you are going to put all of your effort into finishing this.... I LOVE VEELA STORIES but they really are sooo hard to actually get involved in bc you never know whether they will be finished or not and then you feel like you are left hanging... anyhoo i really love this fic so far and i cannot wait to read more... :-) also thank you so much for your dedication

Well, I, for one, would look forward to seeing your ideas on Veelas. I think the device that others have used....the Veela charms work on all BUT the chosen Mate could still work here, even though you've already mated them. So, let's see Draco ride in like the cavalry and save the day, shall we? :D

The marking is the main event but being These two who they are the fun part just has begun..... I will enjoy this one very much

Yeah, it really isn't surprising that veelafics never have endings. Glad this one will, though!
Looking forward to the next chapter.