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for To Suffer a Veela

by Gryffindorclutz

person jaceni50
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's great that you continued to keep writing. I love this story even though Draco does get me mad sometimes. :) Keep them coming.
person marieve
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Draco better watch out cause Hermione is quite resourceful and will somehow find a way to either lessen his pheromones or just try and cut her loses and randomly leave or something in order to get on with her life. He's going to have to learn the marvelous invention of an actual relantionship and a brilliant little thing called compromise...I can't wait until that happens. His plan of keeping her in his bed all the time and just forcing his decisions (aka going to Paris) without talking about with Hermione is going to blow up in his face. Brilliant chapter! I can't wait for the next ones to come out!!!
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved the labyrinth reference! :)
Hermione is taking Draco's dominance pretty well!!
can't wait for more! :)
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love veela fics and this is one that I have a special thing for it. Draco is so possesive that is simply enchanting.. Please more.
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite active WiP.
Thank you for splitting point-of-views; it's really good to see how completely stupid Draco is, and to know EXACTLY what Hermione's thinking that he's just not getting. I can feel her pain, and I hope that he has a serious "come to Jesus" experience that makes him understand what he's doing to her. Keep it up, you're fabulous!
person kazfeist
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for updating, and for once the link to an outside picture WORKED! Hooray! Poor Hermione! Couple typos, but not that they detracted from the story. I look forward to seeing what happens next. :D
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LORD, that man is HORNY! PHEW! I'm surprised she can walk. I loved it when he said "but I'm yours." Oh, the power she wields and she doesn't even realize it.

Thanks for the update.
person NatalieL
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story.
Are you continuing?
person mlui
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
5: Hehe, I love the last line and Hermione's thought of "Damn those pheromones!". Great chapter and I hope you'll update again soon!
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yum! I love Draco in your stories. So demanding and possessive. Just reading your story makes me wish that it was me he was dominationg! Update soon!!!