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The first three chapters were very well written and already established the foundation of Draco's and Hermione's relationship, as well the character's personalities.

I know you haven't updated this in a while but I hope you will complete it at some point.

very good!!please update soon1

I love this story. In fact, I love all of your stories. I hope that you contnue to update, because I hate to see good stories that never get completed. I have lots hope for yours and I am always checking the site to see if you updated.

I can not wait to see where you take this and Hermione's reaction to Draco involvong his parents to help them both in the mating. I am thinking that even though she may appreciate the thought later, she is uncertain and just a little fearful of them now. Please update soon! The suspence is killing me slowly!

This story is simply brilliant!!! I do hope you will continue writing it as it is too good to be abandoned! I will cry, seriously ... *miserable sniff* ))) I would be delighted if you could possibly let me know if you are planning on updating it! Feel free to drop me a line on: ashewolf@mail.ru Ms Velvela XD :)

Hey sweet pea I was really hoping that you will finish this story! Please!!!

Just wanted to let u know that I love this story this is how I think that Veela's should act! overprotective dominate. I like that he makes her submit and even tho she fights it a little that makes it all the more better. so great job I'm really enjoying it.

Temptress of nite

Hope you update soon. Awsm story

I am definitely hooked! What a great story. It figures that poor Draco would not have it easy. The way you have him written, I am more upset by how he feels when shunned than I am for how Hermione feels for what he has done to her. Looking forward to the next chapter. Love your stories. p

Hiya Its Brittany I LOVE this story! Very creative and well written. I enjoy your take on the Veela's and their characteristics as well has how your using Narcissa as the buffer in the relationship (She'll get them whipped into shape). Please continue with this, you're doing a fantastic job. I've also read some of your other stories as well. A Blacks mistake was mind blowing! It actually made me cry but it really made sense though from what was described in the books about her being beautiful but cold and closed off. Always on my mind was really good. Draco amused me :) This story though is my favorite so far I'm loving how you've written Hermione and how she isn't afraid of speaking her mind and sticking up for herself despite the cruel hand she's been dealt. Hermione (at least in my own opinion) isn't submissive. She's highly opinionated, headstrong, and independent so needless to say this is very interesting! Please update soon. As a matter of fact I'm holding your camera hostage. HA!

It is such a good tale hope you finish it