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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yah! Another chapter! I love how the veela pheromones affect her. Is that because she's marked now? It didn't seem to work before apparently. I also like how Draco feels remorse, but is still Slytherin enough to take advantage of the situation when given. Great chapter and looking foward to the next one!
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"He was confident however, that he could curb those instincts with sexual dominance." What a very telling line.
So glad you're picking this up. Love the contrast between the emotions he feels versus the savage frustration he's felt at having to wait for so long to have her. I love how she's still strong but at his mercy.
One small thing - you keep noting that he "drug" her with him...its actually "dragged" - "drug" means he sedated her with...well...drugs (and in essence he did that with his pheromones as well). LOL - I think you mean he pulled her behind him, hence "dragged". :-) Just a small piece of con-crit/feedback. Look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for updating!
So glad you're picking this up. Love the contrast between the emotions he feels versus the savage frustration he's felt at having to wait for so long to have her. I love how she's still strong but at his mercy.
One small thing - you keep noting that he "drug" her with him...its actually "dragged" - "drug" means he sedated her with...well...drugs (and in essence he did that with his pheromones as well). LOL - I think you mean he pulled her behind him, hence "dragged". :-) Just a small piece of con-crit/feedback. Look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for updating!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You ever going to update?
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, interesting story so far. Hope you continue it.
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this... hope you keep it going.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. A new Veela fic. FAntastic. I honestly thought that you are no longer a part of the fiction world since I haven't seen anything from you in months. Like I said before, you are my inspiration...the wheels in my head are starting to turn. I was hoping you would write a sequal to Black Mistake Draco/Hermione style.
Anyway, as always I thought your fic was greately written and to the point. Hope you won't keep us waiting too long!
Anyway, as always I thought your fic was greately written and to the point. Hope you won't keep us waiting too long!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that this reminded me of Malfoy's Mate, a fic which I really enjoy since it is over veelas and youve written it beautifully and I hope you continue this as the time progresses :) Thanks for updating while you have such a hectic schedule, school does it in for me as well :(
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE where you are going with this. And Hermione's fear and frustration with the whole Veela concept I wonderful. I read Malfoy's Mate also and was frustrated that it wasn't finished so I hope you continue this story. I really like all your work and send my good thoughts to you. I hope your muse comes back as I can't wait to see what happens!
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start to a Veela fic...I'm anxiously waiting for an update for "After Midnight"...I hope your writer block passes, so you'll be able to update soon! =)
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay i am totally loving this story!!!! i am so very looking forward to this story! i will be watching for the other stories to be updated but in the mean time i am totally loving the distraction of this story! :) i love the beginning and i will be waiting for more i do hope that it is soon! :)