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for Deja Voodoo

by vbruce

schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the interaction between Sev and Lucius...is the most refreshing one I've read to date. There are so many fun sides to your Lucius and it's so enjoyable to watch him slip and in and out of his many facades. He is the perfect Slytherin.

And Hermione is obviously enamoured. Let's hope she does go get him.
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope she pukes on him again. That's what you get for shoving food in someone's face after they've just done it a few hours before. Also, for making a voodoo doll of them and trying to trick them into kissing you. Now, with me, voodoo dolls wouldn't be necessary and he could just stand there and I'd be all over it, but alas, apparently he enjoys forcing his hand. Oh well. Wonder if he'll get a knee in the nuts soon? I mean, what HASN'T she done to the man? I suppose next chapter will tell.lol
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schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* Should I feel sorry for Hermione or Lucius? Hermione 'cause Lucius is chasing her or Lucius for having Sev floating around (literally)?

*grins* MOre? Please?
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Question i forgot to ask before, that Deep Purple song from a previous chapter, what album is it from? Man, i love that band!! So great live!

Anyway,

Still loving this story, its so light hearted and fresh. Keep it up, please. More...
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks. The reason I asked is that the spell has some similarities to a few found in 'the Long Lost Friend', an old compendium of Pow-Wow and folk magics, but the overall format is unusual. Now I will wait politely for the next chapter, and thank you very much!
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That last line in chapter 6 was hilarious...no I think Luc is smart enough, sick in the head slightly as well, but smart enough for Hermione.

I love the snarky commentary between Sev and Luc, it just makes for a wonderful day doesn't it. And Hermione probably doesn't even know why she's there - Luc go hide that doll!
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK, this is something I NEVER do, but please update this soon? I'm going through withdrawal, here. Normally I just wait for the author to update as they see fit, but this one is too good to let go. Please? With sugar on top? And a Lucius-flavored cherry?
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this story at Chapter 5 and inhaled it all at once. This is amazing. I love that you like this pairing enough to have two stories in the works about them. I always thought that Hermione and Harry would get together, but this is so much more what she needs! Mature, cunning, brilliant and determined, Lucius is sure to end up with what he wants, but I am impressed to see that he is not using wizarding magick to get Hermione. I can barely wait for more! Fantastic writing and mesmerising!