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by AndreaLorraine

schedule August 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this was such a cute story! I love Narcissa when she's sweet. Thanks for the great read!
person Jillian
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! My favorite line: "I don't hit on women. I seduce them." It portrayed Malfoy Sr. perfectly!
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the Surprise! I didn't see it coming, I figured that was the real Narcissa and Lucius. Oh and the little touch with the black eye was the best.
person PhoenixRhapsody
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure the winner is thrilled with this fic. It is absolutely awesome. You have quite a craft! Very good!
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I seriously don't know how one writes a one shot! I have so many ideas running through my head that I couldn;t possibly limit it to a few thousand words on one page! This was great! And it left me satisfied at the end and not sickening for more!

Lovely stuff!
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story, but agree with Kittycat30. Hermione should have been totally ticked that the Malfoys had the gall to test HER character! I was waiting for her to say, "Well, I don't have to test yours b/c you have already proven it's abysmal!"
person mlui
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story. I was slightly horrified at all the situations and am glad that it was all a ruse (well except for Daphne). =)
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HILARIOUS.
person tohru80
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That story was the perfect mixture of Malfoy snobbery and family love. I really enjoyed reading this. Now I am off to read the latest chapter of HTC!!!
person Tenar10r
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squee! That was wonderful!