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for How the Mighty have Fallen

by luv1711

schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! Glad to see this one is being continued. I like what you've done so far and will wait happily for more.
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really like this so far, loved the sorting hats reply! Can't wait for the next chapter if you have an update list could you add my e-mail? It's dolphins_dream_too@hotmail.com Can't wait for an update!
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just started this one, and I'm liking it. Please, are you going to have her zap James and the Marauders? I've always thought they needed a few hexes for their behaviour. More, please, whenever you're ready.
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a very good begining chapter, i look forward to reading more.
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, a time turner fic....I'd like to read more.

One small reader favor, can you please cut your paragraphs in key places. The opening and ending ones were monstrously long. Its easier to read they weren't so huge. Thanks in advance.
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I look forward to reading more.