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for Melanin

by AislingSiobhan

person LadyWolf
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I actually stumbled upon it the other night and have throughly enjoyed reading it.
The ending has be thinking...it was kind of anti climatic. I guess the way it was worded, "we fought, I won, he lost" I would think that his darker half is not gone entirely, right? He's still inside Harry, right?
Will he get loose one day? or is he trapped forever?
Sorry for all the questions, but I truly loved reading this. I love seeing Harry paired up with different characters. (fav is Jacob/Harry
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
a new fave of mine. very well done. ^^
person Bethany
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A fun read. Thank you for posting!
person GellyBelly
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHH! Harry/Nuada fic! I'm soo happy! Finally! And a good one too man!
I love you for making this story!
person Diane
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Best. Ending. Ever. XD
person Melanie
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! I totally love your style and the way you portray the characters. :D Although, if I were to criticize anything, it would be that it didn't last long enough and that the ending was really abrupt. D: Seeing 'The End' made me sad. lol Keep up the good work, and crank out dem stories! ;D
person Mystic
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! Please write more! Maybe some mpreg? *begs*
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story. I was hoping for some kiddies but the sex was more than enough to satisfy me. XD
person vaire
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So is it actually complete this time? Im really glad you continued it some more. Its such a wonderful idea and there arent nearly enough of this fic out there. Great work.
person kirigirl
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Could there be more in the future if we all ask really really nicely? I want to see Ginny get her butt kicked again... And Draco needs to move on...And there need to be little Nuadas...