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Their discovery of one another was hot, sweet, touching and perfect. Thank you!

Wow. Hot. Left me breathing heavily.

What a way you have with smut.

But what a delicious chapter story this could be. I already see an immediate conflict that could be interesting to explore. She's pinned her hopes/dreams/asipirations on him. She wants to be his and none other. Yes, I get that she says she'll be his for as long as he wants her, but he's made no declarations of the same. I worry about the 'clinging virgin' factor. I read nothing in this fic that hinted at an emotional committment from Severus or a desire to continue it beyond a desire to take the other uncharted territory (which is hot). He's a man in emotional upheval from terminating his employment. Oh there are so many avenues to explore. Please say the next story will tackle some of these fascinating angles. Oh beautiful angst. And you write it so well.

The best bloody story I've read in ages! God I hope there's more chapters to come.

I enjoyed this srory as it was well paced and well put together....good work

Brilliant, I loved it! And, I applaud your idea of writing a follow up, I really want to read that one too:-))

Phew, that was hot! And very very nice!

Very nice, dearest. I like that it was tender. Many see Snape as brutal, incapable of being a tender lover. He loved once, so obviously there is tenderness in him somewhere. Or so I tell myself lol. I can see him as both a dom and a sub. I can see him needing to be in control but I can also see him needing to give up his control to a woman as well. Though primarily I see hermione as a sexual sub....


not sure how that applied here....I have a tendency to flitter off on little tangents sometimes, forgive me. I dont review alot because I tend to forget but wanted to take the time to tell you I enjoyed this =)


Happy Writing!!
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Brilliantly and beautifully written! I'll happily read the next chapter.

Um, damn. *fans self*


Seriously, wow.


I loved the entire thing. I loved how they were just laying there rubbing circles on each other... and the sex... holy fuck.

Can't wait to find out what happens next :]

I'll be on the look out for the chapter where she loses her "other virginity" lol and I def think this should turn into a longer story... but thats up to you, obviously.


Brilliant story :]

WOW!! :D Your story is fantastic!! Really; I love it! The scene when they are lying in the grass: BRAVO! You've made my day with this hot one-shot. I really hope you will do another chapter, as you said. Thank you for giving us a such good story :)