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for His Alone

by mollycrown

person freedom2dreamers
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very well paced, and written
<3 keep up the good work.
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the best fics I've ever had the pleasure to read! It was realistic and deliciously lascivious! I can't wait for the addition, it sounds absolutely captivating!
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ignore suggestions of angst!!!!!!! These two have nothing to do over the summer, they are both at loose ends and found each other to be interesting at least sexually, let them explore that without the trouble some readers want to put into the relationship! You have such a good beginning going for a new and interesting story where Severus and Hermione can just be themselves (which is what they are both looking for) without the intrusion of others... it would just be great if they had at least a few months of time to discover each other and whatever comes along with that! Loving the story!
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy!!

I absolutely loved the way he was so peacefully ,finally saying his goodbyes to a dark and painful life! It was so quiet and the words so gentle! Just beautiful.

And then , Sweet Merlin...oh oh oh!!! Good Heavens...THE perfect moment !! I'm afraid she is ruined now...no other man will ever be good enough for her, not after this! hehehehe

Perfect!

Chapter two, please!
person Shiv5468
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOh very nice.
person sdemelo
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well THAT was hot... I may have to go find my boyfriend now. I definitely look forward to part 2!
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved this one and looking forward to the next!
person ABC123
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great one-shot. Good glimpse into Hermione's head.
person nastygrl
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH! This was soo hot! And awesome! I loved how you set the scene, how you portrayed Hermione as a lonely and a little outside it all, and Snape leaving in the morning. That Snape wasn't some love god (although I think he is) made it better, more real.

Great job!
person tutorlib
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, This is a great story! I really want to read more and... more of it. Thanks for sharing it with us.