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by Digitallace

schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not so worried about Draco, as i'm pretty sure he'll get his man in the end, but seriously, poor Harry. He probably feels he is about to loose the only family he's ever had. Although I'd love to find out what he said to Ron that would make him laugh like that.

Keep up the great work!
person polka dot
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like that Draco didn't rat on Hermoine. Poor thing she's already married to ron, that's enough of a cross to bear.
person ThePinkLady
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My first thought was Ginny sending the invite to Draco as a final test for Harry, but no bride sets herself up to be dumped at the alter for a man. My galleons are on Hermione. Right? Really far off?

Heart broken Draco is just killing me, can't wait to see if he goes to the wedding or not.

schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:( poor Draco
Its so sad and heartbreaking lol I cant get enough!!!!!!!
So please my favorite author, update soon?
person Jess
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harry is really irritanting. I hope he suffers A LOT before Draco giving him another chance. This story is terrific!! Not that that it's a surprise considering you're the author. Congratulations for another amazing fic!!! (This harry is a pain in the ass... he irritates the hell out of me.heiueheiuehieuheieu.)
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this quote. when i read it just now, i acutally heard xander in my head, saying those words. well chosen!
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh... noooo... how can Harry be so continually stubborn and stupid?!?!? I'm in agony here... lol! I almost thought Ron was going to call him on it... but no, Ron turns out to be just as oblivious as always... :)
person Juana13
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ARG!!!!
STUPID, DUMB HARRY!!!!!!!!!!
ugh i really hate him in this story. he's so stupid. i wish he'd listen to hermione's advise and realize the truth bout his feelings.
but gosh i feel so bad for draco. he loves harry so much and has to deal with seeing him get married to another woman...and he knows he cant do anything about it anymore. whatever he does just makes things worse...
i really look forward to the next chapter.
the next update will determine everything. if they get married...bye bye draco and hello stupid ginny. and if they dont get married...well then that means drama. and i love drama!! : )
i cant wait to see what happens, and i only wish that if they do decide to get married-- which YOU BETTER NOT END THAT WAY!!-- then i only hope draco finds himself another happy ending.
he's gone through enough already.
but anyway, hope you update real soon!!
can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 12!!!
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my, was this a meddling mione moment?
Poor Draco, this chapter was really touching.
Keep up the good work!!!!!!
cant wait for more
:)