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by Digitallace

person Polka Dot
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah he really should have made the decision about 5 minutes earlier. Porr Ginny and it's gonna be in the papers too, she's definitely not gonna be well for a while after tihs.
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When Harry broke things off at the alter, I think you had Hermione express exactly what I was thinking. LOL

^^

Keep up the great work!
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAY! I was actually beginning to panic when Harry was saying his I do's at the alter lol. My heart was pounding and I had the biggest grin when he left her for Draco. Am I a bad person?

Keep up the good work! x
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No... this way Draco gets is heart broken... If Harry gets his head out of his arse then Ginny gets her hopes of being a 'first lady' dashed... She has to know that Harry isn't IN LOVE with her... she just ignores it to get what she wants... fame and fourtune...

schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:(
Heartbreaking and touching
I feel bad for everyone lol
Obviously Draco, but your right, everyone got the short
end of the stick in this situation.
Still loving every minute however
although I am so very curious as to what Harry was laughing at??? Hm?
Guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter
update soon??
person Susanne
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Love love love your story!
Please update soon!!
person Jess
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Grr, I HATE GINNY.

Poor Draco, he's like a lost little lamb *sob*
person Alyssa
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uhhh.. there's no poor Harry! He choses to marry that girl doesn't he? He can say that he won't. Draco is so cute!
So... just cute :) how you wrote it that he stands in front of the door where Harry is fixing himself en than he just gets in and says i dont want to interrupt. funny! Hermione is really smart in this story ;) funny.
And i just know Harry feels the same as Draco does.. (surprise! kidding :P!)
But it's a niiiiice story love it... please update soon (but you already do that :D so keep up the good work then haha)
person Juana13
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah, of course someone is gonna get hurt no matter what harry does, but he shouldnt hurt the person he loves the most!!!!!!!!
i'm confused as to why harry would laugh like that after draco left. there must be a reason why he would do that.....
and poor draco!!!!!!! (you knew that was coming.....)
now he's really gonna get drunk...
i hope he doesnt commit suicide...although talk bout drama if harry does indeed to go to stop him in time.... (sorry, rambling)
(but now onto the questions!)
what will harry do??? will he save draco in time? will he go after him at all??? This is supposed to be a draco/harry story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you and your damn cliffies.... : (
. . .
anyway, i REALLY!! look forward to the next chapter! PLEASE! update soon. i really cant wait!!
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 13!!!