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by Digitallace

schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok so yay only thing that could have been better is killing ginny off...but i guess thats asking for a bit much no? we better get some good sex outta this too....you have to make up for having so much ginny in the story! lol!
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 15!!!
person Juana13
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course don't end it there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so glad that harry and draco are FINALLY together! Oh, but this isnt the end for them, is it? I mean, Harry still has to deal with the Weasleys. Ooooh, I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next! I really, really look forward to it. I hope the end is soon, but not TOO soon. I love this story too much. : )
Looking forward to it!!
person polka dot
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well yes you could end it there, but I think that Ginevera deserves just a little something good too, like maybe a hot swedish masseur.
person SP777
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #14...

I haven't reviewed this in a LONG time, but here goes...
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I have to admit it was white-knuckle time with that last chapter, I
was ACTUALLY getting nervous & 2 seconds away from yelling at the
compter screen, 'Nooo...you jackass!!! Who gives a damn about the
Weasleys!!! Walk Away! Walk Away!'

I loved this latest chapter, sweet to the end...too bad you got other
folks in this story who'll ruin such sweetness. :-/
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harry is totally a drama queen! lol... I LOVED it... although I have to admit I thought you were actually going to let him go through with the wedding...
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!
He didn't go through with it!
Woot woot lol
I do feel pretty bad for Ginny but
Im so happy for the boys :)
Im sure it won't be as simple as that however...
lol cant wait for more!!!!!

update soon?????
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm one of the readers that could give a damn about Ginny. Always hated her lol.
person Tree
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOO!!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!! Damn...Harry made me want to pull my own hair out in this one!!!
person Juana13
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah, i actually do feel a bit bad for ginny. i mean, i'd be devestated if i'd been left at the alter. hopefully you show her finding the right person for her later on once harry and draco are together.
and i really do hope that ron forgives harry eventually. it's only right.
oooh, but what about draco?! right now, he's probably drinking away and hurting himself. i really hope harry gets to him in time.
update soon please! cant wait! i already look forward to it!!!!!!!!!!!! : )