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by Digitallace

person SP777
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

You know, if I was Draco...I would get my 'whoop-ass' stick...and yes I DO have one..
and proceed to beat the BS out of Harry. I mean what HAPPENED to that Gryffindor
courage, when did he become a coward???

How indecisive can he be, personally I would get my priorites straight and AT LEAST
tell Ginny I don't want to get married. Hell, I would have done that before the planning went into effect. But that's just me...
person Ayame
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like all the descriptions of Draco and Harry's eyes...sounds really hot...hmm...this is getting better and better...what is going on...Narcissa knows something
person Ayame
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Kiss....i love your descriptions...i'm trying to write a Harry/Draco fanfic right now...and I'm worried I won't be able to write the things I need to write...how did you feel when you first starting writing things of that nature?
person Ayame
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if my first review went through...my internet was being a dork. But the kiss scene wow! I love your descriptions. ^_^
I'm trying to write a fanfic of my own...and those scenes make me blush...i'm not sure if i can get threw them...did you feel weird too when you first started writing things of that nature?
person Ayame
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...I want to yank my hair out at Harry's fickleness...oh...we as readers know that Draco is perfect for him...but God....this is frustrating
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please! Please! update soon lol
person Amessis
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Harry! Poor Draco- I hope he gets even.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH the idiot!!! I soooo need chapter 6!!!
person Juana13
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! god, stupid harry for doing that! i cant believe him, oh and i hate the thought of poor draco being rejected. he's already had so much to deal with already, and now there's more added to his depression. : (

I really, really like this story. You've got me so interested! and i really wonder how its gonna turn out. and what is ginny gonna do? is the wedding meant to go on? i wonder how long it'll take harry to either realize his mistake or for draco to confront him directly about it.

goodness, i really hope you continue with this soon! love how you portray the characters. already like the fifth chapter and you've got me so interested in it!!!
hope you update soon! so looking forward to it!
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!!!