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December 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't mind seeing more.
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Can't wait for chapter 3!!! Though you spelled a few things wrong: Lucius and Diagon.
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well this is interesting so far, one little thing, you spelled lucius wrong and McGonagal was wrong too but other than that looks like it'll be a good story
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic quite a bit at the moment and I really look forward to reading more... however, I would suggest getting someone to beta it for spellings of character names like McGonnagal (that's probably not even right!) and Lucious... Damn it! You know how when you read something that you know is spelt wrong but then you try to spell it yourself and you can't remember how the original was spelt?! Aargh!
Anyway, awesome story, just needs a bit of editing...
Please update again soon,
Stef
Anyway, awesome story, just needs a bit of editing...
Please update again soon,
Stef
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like how the story's going so far. i wonder why draco was nervous in the kitchen? hehehe. i can't wait for u to post the next chapter!
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So. What exactly is their summer project about?
I find this story amusing. ^^ While there were a few bits that confused me (i.e. Malfoy limo and car phones, Wizards using car phones, no year was mentioned-how old are they?, when in the summer does this take place? Was Harry already at the Dursleys prior to this project? etc..) the overall story is delightful.
Keep up the good work.
I find this story amusing. ^^ While there were a few bits that confused me (i.e. Malfoy limo and car phones, Wizards using car phones, no year was mentioned-how old are they?, when in the summer does this take place? Was Harry already at the Dursleys prior to this project? etc..) the overall story is delightful.
Keep up the good work.
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far, I'm really enjoying it and can't wait for more. I am really enjoying the plot and I can't wait for the relationship to develop!
my only small nit-picking criticism is the misspelling of Draco's father. It's Lucius not Luscious. Sorry! I just wanted to let you know.
my only small nit-picking criticism is the misspelling of Draco's father. It's Lucius not Luscious. Sorry! I just wanted to let you know.
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue this! It is great!
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I sooo sooo need more! Those two sooo make me laugh!!!