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for Chosen Fate

by Onikage

person Jan
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Love it!!!!

Please, please update chapter 4 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i resent that you said chinese was more harsh.. but meh, anyways, oba-san is aunt or grandma it's not miss... i don't think they have a word for miss in japanese... hm... ojou-san? young lady? would probably work better good story though, please update soon, i'm looking forward to the next chapter^^
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great beginning of the story i hope you will update it soon
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait to see the next chapter. Is Harry going to be paired with Naruto because if so is he going to be his own charcter or reincarnated as Sauske because if not i don't know how an uchiha would take to some other raven going after his blond
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! There are a few mistakes, but overall it's a keeper!
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious!!! Harry is so cute as baby. I think I know whose Harry going to be pair up with. It is Gaara, isn't it? Or maybe I could be wrong. Mmmm...
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tonks...***sniffle***.
But a great start for a Fic... =^.^=
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok i have to say one thing about the angel of death,"yuck" ok now that is out of the way... love the story and i cant wait to read more, poor tonks, is she really dead or is just a body for people to realize that harry is all by hisself....
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it, please update soon!!
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Un-Freaking-Believeable!!! This is awesome..Please keep going