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for Chosen Fate

by Onikage

person hup
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
not fair. you give us this great idea that we know will be an awesome story and you just cut it off right when it was getting good. tease.
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well shit...
I SO did not see that happening. When Voldemorts spirit or whatever rose and then slammed into him had me all gidd in a fangirl sort of way that my mind ran with possibilities for my own version of a fic, lol. Sadly, I have too much on my plate but I must say that the 1st chappy was awesome. Really it was. It makes me want to continue onwards and the fact that the weasley's backed him up with turning their wands! Yay! I love stuff like that!
Dahlias
Can't wait for more!
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 Review:
Very interesting. Could it be that when he felt Tonks magic well up that he snatched it? His life for hers?
I do have two things so please don't take offence. when I read over this part:
''The udder blackness was beginning to drive him insane.''
I had to drop my head and laugh. Udder is the thing that cows have, it should be Utter.
Second:
''A load hissing in the back then caught Harry
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is good, I hope to see more of this soon! A chibi Harry is just so cute!! ^^
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!!! i offer to beta this fic, email me a lonelyreverance@yahoo.com. more soon please!!!
person Vex
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing idea! How original, I've never even heard of anything like this.

Poor Harry, nothing ever happens easily for him.
person With Sweet Vengence
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... OH MY GOD!!!!!!
I read this so long ago and I honestly wondered if it might be a dead fic. But YAY it's not!!! CHEERS!!!!
I can't wait to see what happens next. I was actually hoping that he'd be raised in the Nara clan.
Poor Tonks. I hope he marks her grave when he's old enough to use tools. Even if everyone will be all "WTF?"
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!! i am looking forward for the next chapter
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yet another good chapter. n.n But..I'm still waiting on an update from that Death Note/Harry Potter crossover of yours. :( Is there a possibility of that story being updated any time soon?

schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this story soon, I want to find out what happens.

I also hope you update your Death Note/Harry Potter crossover story, too. :(