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for Chosen Fate

by Onikage

schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great fic. love, love, love the idea. please post more at some point. as I was reading I was so hoping that kakashi would end with harry and boy was I pleased to read that he did. really would love to read more of how harry grew up, should be extremely amusing when you think over his new father. have you thought about moving this story to another sight to make it easier for people to follow, such as ff.net or archive of our own?
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
will you plesas come back and finish this story is really good and i would love to see how voldermort fits in this and how harry's life is. i was thinking that voldy it a 'demon' but that's just a guess. but anyway please finish the story.
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is completely amazing! I love it! Never thought of a Naruto/Harry Potter crossover before. This is really good!
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol I loved this please update when you can!
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This very good, s a rather strange name

Kaito hungry want to eat
person vampzero
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yuppi for 5 chapter!!! I'm not suprized with name, no not at all, it's Kakashi after all, ne)
What happened to Momoko?? I really don't remember anything about Hiashi's wife. Was she killed? Did he take a lover later? I know that he didn't like Hinata very much because of her weakness. Did his wife died in childbirth? Why did you wrote this:
2) For all of you the know what will eventually happen to Hinata
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yet another wonderful chapter, and I can't even really think of any real grammar problems or anything like that. I only have to say that I still wish you'd update the HP/Death Note crossover story. I love that story. :(
person Kiiyouko
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AW! This is such a cute story I hope you update soon.
person sanda
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, I like it
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I have never seen someone fail that miserably with the Japanese language. You do know that there are a ton of translation websites that are free to use right? It was obvious you weren't even trying to be close to right with Kakashi's lessons, so why did you include them. Also, you even messed up Kakashi's name at some point. If you're going to post something on the web you should at least try to get it right.