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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very cool - Great idea more please
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love how snape is keep it up.
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see harry as either a veela or a high
elf. something to make the entire wizarding world sitr-up and really take notice. please let me know when
you update.
elf. something to make the entire wizarding world sitr-up and really take notice. please let me know when
you update.
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would rather Harry be a very powerful wizard as opposed to a creature (or at least be a very powerful wizard creature) and the golden couple should pay and be exposed for the weak useless things they are. I liked Veracity's ideas (the first reviewer for the story). Thanks for the start of what looks like a very enjoyable story.
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Golden Couple needs to be brought down a couple of pegs. Great start! Write more pretty please....I LOVE inheritance fics!!
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why would the deatheaters still be after Harry? If just about everyone believes that Ron and Hermione killed Voldemort, wouldn't THEY be the deatheaters' targets, rather than Harry?
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Snape---I think he may actually throw a wild-eyed hissy fit! Fabulous job. More please!!!
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Right, first reviewer, so I get to call the shots! Just kidding ;)
Right, here are my suggestions for this fic. Scrap the creature fic, great in certain scenarios but combine a power surged Harry with serious revenge on the "golden-couple" and you've got yourself a winner. An extremely powerful Harry should be sure to put the jumped up, self important gits in their place instead of the tired old "rare and treasured" magical creature bla bla bla...
Maybe add in a suspected Voldemort return, expectations of the Golden-couple to vanquish him once again but oops they can't for some weird reason, humph... I wonder why? Er... because they didn't in the first place!
Sorry, plot bunny just hopped out there and got carried away.
BTW, great story you have started here, love it so far. <:o)
Right, here are my suggestions for this fic. Scrap the creature fic, great in certain scenarios but combine a power surged Harry with serious revenge on the "golden-couple" and you've got yourself a winner. An extremely powerful Harry should be sure to put the jumped up, self important gits in their place instead of the tired old "rare and treasured" magical creature bla bla bla...
Maybe add in a suspected Voldemort return, expectations of the Golden-couple to vanquish him once again but oops they can't for some weird reason, humph... I wonder why? Er... because they didn't in the first place!
Sorry, plot bunny just hopped out there and got carried away.
BTW, great story you have started here, love it so far. <:o)
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story,
Should I let Harry become some kind of creature? yes
Should I let Harry become some kind of creature? yes
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, there really isn't much to go on here. If Voldemort is gone, why did Harry have to return to the Dursleys'? How did he end up back in the cupboard under the stairs? Has Sirius been cleared?
As for Ron and Hermione, I think they should be exposed for the liars and backstabbers that they are in the most public and humiliating way possible.
As for Ron and Hermione, I think they should be exposed for the liars and backstabbers that they are in the most public and humiliating way possible.