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for Once

by Mountainleaf

person hermioneSNAPEfan1983
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please tell me she doesnt have sex with someone else and gets pregnant by them?? also why cant severus have children??? maybe magick can fix it???
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
did the fake cock in severus ass virbarte aswell?? if not hermione should cast as spell to make it vibrate too!!!!
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ginny curled up tightly against her husband and drifted off to sleep.

Across the hallway Ginny and Harry lay awake listening. They had heard most of the conversation and were hoping that the potion worked as well. It was terrible to see Hermione suffer that way. When quiet was finally heard through out the house Ginny and Harry went to sleep as well.


you make a mistake surely you mean Hermione (not Ginny) curled up tightly against her husband and drifted off to sleep

as ginny was awake with harry and listing to what hermione and severus were saying and doing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
how come severus is infertilal unable to have children? what happend to cause this and why didnt he fix it probally in chapter 7 in this story?? also why didnt snape know he was infertilal unable to have children untill he married hermione and started trying to have a baby with her????
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
is the potion he drank the reason she is pregant with twins like with IVF that can happen too the maybe having more than one baby? or is it just out of chance she is having twins and the twins has nothing to do with the potion he drank???
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice and interesting little story. Off to read the sequal.

Tiffany
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it. Make sure you mark this one as completed since it is finished.
person Fallen Star
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Give that woman a baby!!!! Please its killing me that she can't have one damn it.... In fact give her several... But great story!!! But please for the love of Dumbledore give them a baby or twins!!!! Snape twins oh lord that would be great!!!!
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, dear. I am looking forward to reading about what happens with our couple. Here's hoping that she conceives.
person crssmnc
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh I hope you are not finished. I want to see how Severus reacts. Great Fic.