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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very promising first chapters! i especially liked your scene in the bookshop between hermione, draco, and pansy....it's wonderful to see a story where hermione has balls! i'm very interested in hearing more of this daisy character's background, and maybe a little nekkid lucius thrown in on the side. ;) keep up the great work!!!
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very promising beginning! I am looking forward to reading more soon
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great story in an archive that's already known for the great quality of stories published here - I honestly couldn't wait for the second chapter (and that's saying something, since I'm in the middle of end-of-term examinations and have many other things to think about). The problem is - now I'll have to wait for the third one.
Wishing you all the inspiration you might need,
N.
Wishing you all the inspiration you might need,
N.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I loved how Hermione stood up against Pansy and Draco. I look forward to reading more.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the confrontation with Pansy xxx
Glad she's not with Ron...he's a prat and you described him perfectly xxxx
More soon please
10/10
Glad she's not with Ron...he's a prat and you described him perfectly xxxx
More soon please
10/10
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I'll be keeping an eye out for how you do with this. Update again soon hun
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay when are you going into the sorry line.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, both Ron and Ginny gone! I like it hehe!
But yes, she had all her right in saying what she felt to her "bf" Just wanted a copy of his mother. And Aww, poor Harry. But I'm sure you'll find someone else for him.. ??
And yes, now let's introduce the two main characters to eachother??
Keep it going!
But yes, she had all her right in saying what she felt to her "bf" Just wanted a copy of his mother. And Aww, poor Harry. But I'm sure you'll find someone else for him.. ??
And yes, now let's introduce the two main characters to eachother??
Keep it going!
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Oh hell no. Hell to the mother fucking no." But I say hell yes, what a funny story.
Boy is Hermione a spitfire or WHAT? Telling Harry that she's use his guts for garters was hilarious! And loved the confrontation with Draco. Gee, maybe poppa Malfoy might be up for some stiff competition - LOL. Actually, I hope Draco dumps Pansy - he deserves someone better.
Now I hope the next chappie has our two characters meet.
Boy is Hermione a spitfire or WHAT? Telling Harry that she's use his guts for garters was hilarious! And loved the confrontation with Draco. Gee, maybe poppa Malfoy might be up for some stiff competition - LOL. Actually, I hope Draco dumps Pansy - he deserves someone better.
Now I hope the next chappie has our two characters meet.
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is going to be a great story.. I can feel it..
Sat here half giggeling when I read this, going to be soo good!
I can't help to think that it wont be as easy as just sending her off to school. Looking at he's hiring help to well help him.
Go on please!!!
Sat here half giggeling when I read this, going to be soo good!
I can't help to think that it wont be as easy as just sending her off to school. Looking at he's hiring help to well help him.
Go on please!!!