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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

person Rosamund
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! I keep enjoying this story :)
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loving this story. very original. cant wait for an update
person Lady Disdain
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice concept for a story! :) Like the idea of Daisy hehe she sounds like fun! Lovely how Hermione deflected Malfoy and Parkinson! Keep up the good work!
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was the best encounter ever -- sizing each other up to kill each other was funny. And then enter little Daisy who is completely OBLIVIOUS to everything. Getting her period was a brilliant move and Hermione would of course help her. Lucius should just hire her to help tutor Daisy - since Hermione has no job. Surely she can complain about her bosses treatment? She was being sexually harassed by that other idiot. I really like how you had them meet at the bookstore.
person Ash
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story! Poor Daisy...but wow that would be funny to see! Normally I wait until a story is either complete or has around 10 chapters before I read but I'm glad I caught on to this one soon!
person amy skydancer
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...as i realize i just read all the chapters in one foul swoop.....i better review or I'll REALLY feel bad...

LOVED the timing of Daisys need for help. and i think i scared one of my rabbits as I hooted ( quite loudly ) at the Book ABOUT rocks.....I find it very easy to visualize your story..Lucius' face as the realization of Orphans = sad helping orphans = happy....i saw a big lightbulb float over his head! (course..that could have been one of the house elves...lol)


I'm owling You a bag of Plot Bunny Treats to keep them healthy and active, cause this story is AWESOME!!!
person Carine
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
Men are idiots!well I can undersign that.My hubby and myself have two girls.He was freaking out at the thought that I could not be home when they get their period.Sometimes he's a perfect dunderhead,but even though I endlessly love him....sigh...
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I am glad that Hermione was at the book shop or Daisy might have cried because Lucius wouldn't have known what to do.
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great idea for their meet-cute...or not so cute, hehe. You are writing Lucius well so far. I think once he figures out how to handle a girl, he will be a wonderful guardian. I, for one, love it when fanon gives him a daughter, because he spoils them rotten and they end up being his little princess.

I think Daisy will discover that her guardian is also lonely, and she'll spot the chemistry between Lucius & Hermione before they do. Perhaps Daisy has inherited the Slytherin tendency for meddling... ;)
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah the curse of the period happening in the most damn akward place possible. What a wonderful thing to bring people together! Heck I know what Daisy's going through my first one was in school.... Hehe I'd have loved to see Lucius' face. The poor poor flustered man. Muhahaha. Keep it up, love it!

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