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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun, sorry I haven't been reviewing. I've been catching your updates right before bed and I'm too tired to type. Cute chapters. I almost felt sorry for ol Lucius with the "female problem". almost. Looking for your next update. I like this story :)
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just friendly suggestions for French: phrases like "to hell and back" are a bit hard to translate propperly without having them sound really odd, so I don't have any suggestions for how to fix it, but right now the word you have for "back" refers to the part of the body, not to return. Also, French uses agreement for adjectives, which basically just means that Americain should be Americaine. When you're doing that on babelfish, you can just make it into a sentence to make it fix that, so instead of just translating American, translate She is an American.
Don't worry about too much about the mistakes that babelfish feeds you. I once turned in a paper for a college french course with "arbre de paume" in it, because that's what babelfish gave me for palm tree. As it turns out, the correct term is Palmier. My prof had to ask me what I was trying to say, because it made no sense.
Don't worry about too much about the mistakes that babelfish feeds you. I once turned in a paper for a college french course with "arbre de paume" in it, because that's what babelfish gave me for palm tree. As it turns out, the correct term is Palmier. My prof had to ask me what I was trying to say, because it made no sense.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it...love the continued references to her being half Native American...are you (part) native? I have bits and pieces...have up to 4 continents in me ;) Now, some Hermione/Lucius, please!!!
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I love the way you paint Daisys character.I think she will cause a lot of difficulties to her teachers.I cannot wait to see if they will stay for long or if she will find a way to rid herself of too much pastoral care.(Besides thank you for Severus...)
I love the way you paint Daisys character.I think she will cause a lot of difficulties to her teachers.I cannot wait to see if they will stay for long or if she will find a way to rid herself of too much pastoral care.(Besides thank you for Severus...)
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter! I like Daisy! Though I have problems with the entire corporal punishment thing, mmm., I don't really know why. But I'm very curious ;)
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I admit that I have ignored this story for a while, thinking the plot was to AU to be interesting. What a fool I have been; the plot is brilliant and you write it so well. The advantage is that I got to read 6 chapters in one go, and now you have me completely and utterly hooked on this story! I can't wait to read more.
I just love how Hermione dumped Ron (I hate that pairing and will never be tired of him beeing dumped rather painfully on his scrawny arse:-)). I love how you kept Lucius in character when he first got Daisy's letter. If you had made him out to be a sentimential, new Lucius, who from the bottom of his newfound heart couldn't wait to help his unknown cousin, the story would have been far less interesting than the Slytherin who saw advantages in helping, (he is so much more "fun" if he finds his heart during the story, and actually starts to care for Daisy when he has got to know her). Hermiones confrontation with Pansy and Draco were brilliant too, I do like Hermione so much better when she isn't presented as a doormat everyone can walk over, she did give a rather heavy hand in bringing down Voldibutt after all.
I hope there is a certain teacher who is in for a rather nasty surprice, either from Daisy or Hermione, I also hope to see a lot more of Severus, I adore him, and most of all, write fast and update again soon:-))
I just love how Hermione dumped Ron (I hate that pairing and will never be tired of him beeing dumped rather painfully on his scrawny arse:-)). I love how you kept Lucius in character when he first got Daisy's letter. If you had made him out to be a sentimential, new Lucius, who from the bottom of his newfound heart couldn't wait to help his unknown cousin, the story would have been far less interesting than the Slytherin who saw advantages in helping, (he is so much more "fun" if he finds his heart during the story, and actually starts to care for Daisy when he has got to know her). Hermiones confrontation with Pansy and Draco were brilliant too, I do like Hermione so much better when she isn't presented as a doormat everyone can walk over, she did give a rather heavy hand in bringing down Voldibutt after all.
I hope there is a certain teacher who is in for a rather nasty surprice, either from Daisy or Hermione, I also hope to see a lot more of Severus, I adore him, and most of all, write fast and update again soon:-))
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope that Daisy does what she is told and doesn't get punished by her tutors. I look forward to reading more.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great addition. I wonder when Hermione will become a perminant fixture in the story. I aslo can't wait to find out what happens with Daisy after her lesson.
Great story so far! Can't wait to read more, update soon!
Tiffany
Great story so far! Can't wait to read more, update soon!
Tiffany
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be really good, I can tell. I already love your Hermione, laugh and smile at your Lucius' awkwardness as he is trying, and am amused by your Harry. Daisy May is interesting, too, so far. lol I look forward to more soon! Thank you.