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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for a much needed update. I like this little twist. I would have never thought that Greyback would have a son. Good work keep it up.
Liz
Liz
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh. Nice little side story there. I can't wait to see how that all plays out. Glad to see an update, I can't wait for more!
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, that poor little kid, getting beaten up by that bastard Fenrir...Im not one for violence, but if i was Fenrir's child, I would rip his throat out!
You don't have to be strong, just smart.
But I dont want him to hurt Daisy, little wild child that she is. I mean it, I want her powers. Just to be able to sit in a forest and make things grow,
that is too cool for words.
And I reckon that Hermione could totally kick Lucius' arse from here to next Tuesday if she wanted too...interesting though, that the first thing that
she considered Hexing off is his crown jewels...
Oh, I really can't wait for more of this story, I really do love it.
And I am loving the characters you are creating yourself, there is so much depth to them, and your not making it so bloody obvious about their feelings,
its all subtle, which i prefer, and I think shows the difference between a good writer and a not so good writer.
Keep it up, and I will keep an eye out for when you next update.
You don't have to be strong, just smart.
But I dont want him to hurt Daisy, little wild child that she is. I mean it, I want her powers. Just to be able to sit in a forest and make things grow,
that is too cool for words.
And I reckon that Hermione could totally kick Lucius' arse from here to next Tuesday if she wanted too...interesting though, that the first thing that
she considered Hexing off is his crown jewels...
Oh, I really can't wait for more of this story, I really do love it.
And I am loving the characters you are creating yourself, there is so much depth to them, and your not making it so bloody obvious about their feelings,
its all subtle, which i prefer, and I think shows the difference between a good writer and a not so good writer.
Keep it up, and I will keep an eye out for when you next update.
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sense a bit of potential young romance with Phelan and Daisy....I think he doesn't know what he's in for.
Okay, I hate to say it but morelLucius/Hermione please. Midnight rendevous: her in her sexy Muggle lingerie, searching for a book, runs across a semi-dressed Lucius, mmmm mmmm good...what does happen?
Okay, I hate to say it but morelLucius/Hermione please. Midnight rendevous: her in her sexy Muggle lingerie, searching for a book, runs across a semi-dressed Lucius, mmmm mmmm good...what does happen?
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can tell you that I really love this story in the actual one, love some butt kicking and Greyback son is in for a surprise in Daisy and very young love too ( I hope ) Please more more more.....
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have so far I can't wait to read the rest.
The thing I like the most is you have given Lucius a sense of humor fantastic!
BTW the best line in the who thing is this one
The thing I like the most is you have given Lucius a sense of humor fantastic!
BTW the best line in the who thing is this one
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously digging this story, i have been wanting to read it for a while, but my smegging net is a f**cking arse lately. Bulgaria NEEDS better ways of getting the net in thier villages! Flipping, smegging, shitting, arsehole damn wireless.
There is only one critism i have for this story, and thats the humour. It hurts, and should come with a health warning. LOL. i buggered my rib cage yesturday, and this is really funny...lauging is painful!
Ok, me be serious now. I really do love this story. I love how you have explained why Brition wouldnt want to get the american wizards and witches involoved, it did make sense. But made me think that if there were any pro or anti Voldemort'ists then they would probably get themselves involoved anyway. But then i thought of how American is made up of soooo many different people who orginally came from all over the place and have differing cultures that maybe there wouldnt be a whole lot of pure bloods out there...i dont know. But at the end of the day, it did make sence to me.
I also loved your 'elemental magic' 'earth magic' what ever you want to call it. To be honest, i think i would prefer that to a waving a wand.
Lucius is on my bad side now, hurting a centaur...MEAN! Talk about going off half cocked. Then again, he was trying to protect family, so you know, how can i get too upset. He can be my white knight any day of the week...just you know, take away the horse and add a bed, get rid of the clothes and get me in it. I would be one happy little bunny rabbit after that.
As for Hermione, has she actually accepted the job? And would she be a live-in companion. Because that is how it used to be, free bed and bored, an allowance and half a day off a week i believe was the usual. Could be mistaken tho. In saying that, i can definetly see Lucius doing things the 'old-fashioned' way...you know, just to make sure that Hermione is behaving.
Anyways, i is off...my painkillers are kicking in and i need sleep.
Keep it up, I love this story, i really do!
There is only one critism i have for this story, and thats the humour. It hurts, and should come with a health warning. LOL. i buggered my rib cage yesturday, and this is really funny...lauging is painful!
Ok, me be serious now. I really do love this story. I love how you have explained why Brition wouldnt want to get the american wizards and witches involoved, it did make sense. But made me think that if there were any pro or anti Voldemort'ists then they would probably get themselves involoved anyway. But then i thought of how American is made up of soooo many different people who orginally came from all over the place and have differing cultures that maybe there wouldnt be a whole lot of pure bloods out there...i dont know. But at the end of the day, it did make sence to me.
I also loved your 'elemental magic' 'earth magic' what ever you want to call it. To be honest, i think i would prefer that to a waving a wand.
Lucius is on my bad side now, hurting a centaur...MEAN! Talk about going off half cocked. Then again, he was trying to protect family, so you know, how can i get too upset. He can be my white knight any day of the week...just you know, take away the horse and add a bed, get rid of the clothes and get me in it. I would be one happy little bunny rabbit after that.
As for Hermione, has she actually accepted the job? And would she be a live-in companion. Because that is how it used to be, free bed and bored, an allowance and half a day off a week i believe was the usual. Could be mistaken tho. In saying that, i can definetly see Lucius doing things the 'old-fashioned' way...you know, just to make sure that Hermione is behaving.
Anyways, i is off...my painkillers are kicking in and i need sleep.
Keep it up, I love this story, i really do!
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is good.. we need a little bid of action on the Hermione/Lucius side PRONTO..LOL, just kiding.. this is very good .. I hope your finals went well.. Keep them coming.
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I understand about finals! Gotta love them! NOT! Mine are next week and sooo not looking forward to them. Great chapter though!!