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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

person jstarr713
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. i love this story
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Phelan needs to have someone beat the tar out of him for the better....Lucius had better kick his ass. I bet you though that he'll think Phelan saved her life, who will consequently weedle his way into the household. However, I think Phelan will get much more than what he bargained for (gosh I'm sensing an OCC fic possibly if these two grow up - unless you do it here...).

Hmm, I can't wait to see the Prophet's headlines by the way...I didn't miss that. I love Hermione calling Sev a "twat."

PS: The Unseen - yes, I went back and read it, doesn't mean I'm happy damn it! Someone needs to figure what's going on ... hello????? Hermione is the brightest witch EVER! :-) LOL
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter...something tells me Rita Skeeter is ready to write a scathing story about Hermione and Snape xxx

Loved the toy Cole picked out xx

More soon please xx
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, is Lucius going to need a collar for this stray, or will Phelan see the advantages to saving miss Daisy? AND I'm going to do something horrible to Skeeter. Someday, I swear. As for Severus, my Dad used the hose on a couple of my brothers like that, but they liked it. Mom was furious! LOL.
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me here, this is coming swiftly, as love should be but, hey keep them coming!
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story more and more with each chapter. I really want Phelan to turn out to be ok, and not a nasty git like his father. here's hoping!
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person alina290
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! What a new development is Phelan stays a wolf. Most likely his father will send him away for a good while. I am hoping to the forest and he might meed the niece again.
Liz
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off, assure James that no strap-ons will be injured in our little tryst....LOL nor any tails.

Now, the chappie, dear lord I was laughing a damn hyena....the proctologist joke was so funny I nearly peed on myself...thank you very much. Dear goodness, what ensued after was too hilarious. And the entire Sev sequence was too much.

Um, I think I like Phelan...he's rather interesting. And I love how he's so Slytherin around his father, keeping all his little secrets.

You do a wonderful job of mixing the humor along with the suspense and action.
person Rosamund
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is the werewolf boy of same age as our younger heroine? I have been hoping so...so much hate could turn into something else. :) Great job again!!!