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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 10: Oh, I do like that letter interspersed with Hermione
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww Cole is so cute!!!!! I hope we get to see his development in the story as well. Daisy must be a whole different breed of person. After my parents whipped me, I NEVER hugged them. LOL
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've really liked this story so far, it's unique. I can't wait for a) Draco to come around b) Lucius to claim Malfoy and c) friendship between Phelan and Daisy. Their relationship reminds me of "princess bride" with the dread pirate roberts saying that he's going to kill wesley every day but really respects him. I can see phelan telling daisy every day that he's going to eat her, but really means that she's his best friend when he says it. I alos love the touch of giving Severus a son. I can see Hermione becoming important there too, she's too much of a bleeding heart not to, which is a good thing. thanks for sharing your story.

Jillian
person VoraciousReader
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You may take as long a nap as you like, if it means that you will be well-rested to go after Skeeter! Please make it good? I've been trying to think of ways to get her every time someone uses her in a story--I really hate papparazzi. With both Sev and Luc after her scrawny, semi-literate vindictive ass I'm hoping for a spectacular meltdown.
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Honestly he is being to harsh!!! More More More
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as usual. But c'mon...you GOTTA give me a hint; is there going to be some romance between Phelan and Daisy? When do we get to see some Lucius/Hermione one-on-one action?

Keep up the marvelous working, dearest!
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person Kylie Snape
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! I have loved this story since the very first chapter...I have laughed and cried along the way and cant wait to see what happens next...eagerly awaiting Lucius and Hermione finally giving in to the spark they feel for each other and becoming engulfed in the inferno of passion that is sure to ensue.
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You forgot a very pissed off Granger.
I see a nice glass jar in the picture or possibly plastic with no holes.
person alina290
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Definitely drama, but we like it. There are times when we need it. I wish we could to that, make it rain. I love rainy days. Thank you for your update.
Liz