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Ooh ooh ooh (imagine Hermione-like hand waving) I have an idea!!! ha ha ha Sheesh, Lucius, touchy much? I think someone is a little embarrassed at their past... I'm just saying. lol Oopsey, Hermione, loose lips sink ships, don't you know? :-)

Phelan and Daisy...so teenager-like. Good on you!

Thanks for the fun update,
HG4eva

"Please. I've had the Ministry in my pocket for years." Lmao! Funniest line in the chapter, really! Lots of stories have shopping scenes, but I think this is the first time I've seen Lucius shopping, very nice. And now he's adding pressure? Shame shame, but it wouldn't be Lucius of he didn't give it a try. Good chapter.

Very surprising turn of events... or as we said this is a good mess. Nicely done .. more please...

*insert evil laughter here*


That's all I have to say about that. ^____^

Hormones, that's hilarious! As always, can't wait to read more!

I demand more damnit lol. AWESOME

HA this chapter was just pure and plain fun though I have to give you props on the psychological aspect of Phelan and Lucius, the best way to get someone who has had no one believe them or do anything for them in the past is to make them think they are being used yet state that you have your own intentions. The best way to get them to respect you is to either offer a bit of personal information about yourself first so they can do so or if they do so first be sure to do so soon after. Not immediately though, but when they least expect it. It is a bit of manipulation but sometimes it helps more than someone could no to feel like they know something not many people know about a person everyone thinks they know. I hate the fact I have to do that almost on a routine basis with my line of work and volunteerism, but the fact I help them learn how to trust someone (even if I have to report it to the consular or teacher if something was illegal or was hinted) it is worth it.

I LOVE IT! Though I wish it were updated more, this and one other ff are my only escape from my daily stress from a high volume of classwork. I do understand that life gets in the way though lol. Take care.

Wonderful! I love that Phelan is excited/embarassed by the shop girl. Now to see how he'll A.) Look in his robes B.) React to Daisy's appearance and C.)Behave around her at the Ball.

*sighs happily* C'est magnifique! Honestly darling, it positively brightens my day when this story is updated...I check EVERY day. ^___^ Update again soon!!

Hello Ms. DragonFyre,
I just read all 27 chapters of your story. I enjoyed reading it very much. Your story has me hooked. ^-^ At one of the many funny points I almost had chocolate soy milk come out my nose. O.o Please keep writing I look forward to reading more.
Many thanks from,
KippersDancingOnMyToes

That was fun! Lucius trying to be nice and Phelan trying to big all "big and bad"...ahh the things men do for love/lust. ha ha ha Great chapter, thanks! HG4eva