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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27: Crafty Lucius maneuvers Phelan into
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28: Lucius could see Phelan
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww poor Phelan. Poor Hermione. Doesn't Lucius realize that by telling Daisy for him, she has made Daisy trust him even more? I swear men can't think well at all. Ah well. I suppose I could explain it to him... After tying him to a bed of course lol J/k j/k
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Great work!
Lady Serin
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Great work!
Lady Serin
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry took too long in reading your update. I wanted to have more to read, thank you for updating another chapter.
Liz
Liz
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She should not have said anything. Now he will have her for more than what she is worth.
Liz
Liz
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story. It could use a dedicated Beta to catch of few misused words and phrases repeated in the same sentence or paragraph but even the very best authors need that sort of assistance. Sort of like polishing a diamond. What I am same is you have a well cut multifaceted diamond that could use a tiny bit of polish to bring out its brilliance. I adore your new characters. Daisy and Phelan are delightful. Snape as a daddy is a hoot. As for LM/GH ...what can I say. Bring on the gala :)
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh thats just an evil place to leave it!! hehe I do love this story, please update soon ^_^
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lordy...FINALLY????? I think Lucius was playing her...come on...she gave in too easily.
LOL
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love Cole. he's just so cute. he even manages to make Snape adorable. Phelan is awesome and i think Hermione should have hexed the bits off both Ron and Jason for being so obnoxious.
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More please!! I can't wait to see what happens at the ball. :)