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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

person alina290
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good solos, I do not think I have read any like this before. Very well done. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Liz
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the image of Lucius thinking "be scraping her tonsils with the head of his cock" had me giggling. lol Thanks! The sexual frustration between these two is positively combustible! I hope he doesn't ultimately end the game too early in his eagerness. ha ha ha Nah, not my Lucius! It's sad to think the rest of the people in the house won't see them for a few days though. ;-) Looking forward to the next chapter. :-D Thanks! HG4eva
person Emmy
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God' that was so hot' Damn"Damn" Please update soon,,,,
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(saying smugly) I put down plastic sheeting when I saw that you had updated! Seriously though, I spent half the time drooling and the other half laughing! She likes that bratworst indeed!! lol
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Took me a while to crawl out from under that avalanche of lemons. by the way, I can't find the Manticore--I think his cage got smashed and the poor thing got away somewhere. He'll be back, he likes lemons.
person dragon88
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
keyboard intact enough to write..WOW!! Awesome chapter and yes I quite agree Lucius should spank her more often lol ^_^
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. Lucius can spank me as often as he likes. lol REALLY fantastic update. I can't wait for more!!
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a very hot scene with Lucius and Hermione in it. your story is getting very good and I can't wait for the next chapter. update when you can. love this story.
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29:

Wonderful way to introduce her to dom/sub and still not quite let her know what was going on. I applaud your work. I am pleased to see Lucius is at least trying to court her and be civil about this little infraction lol.

Chapter 30: LOL! Great way to add insult to injury on both parts. That was sooo evil. Having them suffer alone. ^_^ I hope Lucius realizes that by Hermione telling Daisy it saved him the heartbreak and pain of doing it himself.

Can't wait for the next chappie!!!


Lady Serin
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me?? Get rid of the little dumpling?? no, no, i was referring to Greyback. I like the kid, (cant remember how to spell his name right now) but i really think Greyback needs a little comeupance.

Update soon!