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Chapter 33: I adore that Lucius wears reading glasses

I am so glad I caught chapter on the first day of it being updated. I know what you mean about the forums. Most of us do not like to have to log in more than three times to get were we want to be. If you wish to respond to my reviews send them to me to my yahoo lizalya13@yahoo.com. I am also in facebook and LJ. I liked this first kiss very much. I bet Daisy is in cloud nine. I know I would be or was a long time ago. To tell you the truth I cannot even remember my first kiss it was so long ago. Ohhh.. well to be young again and in love. "Just sighs"
Liz

I think Fenrir will get a surprise.....I'm surprised Phelan didn't smell or sense him. LOVED the first kiss. And boy I can't wait to see what Phelan is like if anyone dares to threaten Daisy. I suspect Alpha male wouldn't suffice.

And Lucius is such an idiot. I think he cares more for Phelan than he even realizes. Debt or no debt, Phelan is there to stay.

I guess because I finished my other story a while ago, I didn't get that message. I am glad you mentioned it (although I can't find it on this darn site) so I would be prepared when I start posting my next one. Thanks for that. In your next Author's Note can you explain where to find the answers to the reviews; ie: where to find them in the forums? Again, thanks!

Now, that was so sweet. I love the blush of first love between them, especially when juxtaposed with the comfortable feelings given off by Hermione and Lucius. I fear what Fenrir has planned, but I am sure Lucius, Hermione, Harry (with his new respect of Lucius), Daisy (with her nature magic), and Phelan (with his new interest in Daisy, protective "dog" nature, pride in himself, as well as his hatred of his father) will make mincemeat of him! I look forward to more really soon and thank you again! HG4eva

I did enjoy both chapters very much. I thank you so much for mentioning me on the previous. There are times I miss the updates. My laptop has been on the fritz and so sometimes it does not work the way I want it to. I enjoyed the coupled joining very much are well as the fellatio. Great idea on Hermione's part to wake him up with a good sucking. Very good lemons all around. The mild one between Phelan and Daisy. I do not think you intended to make it so for them yet since they are so young, but it sounded a little limy you know.
Liz

Awwww. I smell a mutual crush between Phelan and Daisy!!!! How adorable!!!!!


Now as for the lemons, I can't wait for Lucius to reveal his fantasies for Hermione and see her reactions. I love her wake up call for him and that it's helping them to spur their relationship forward. Hope to read another chapter soon

Lady Serin

Hmm: chocolate chip cookies? Lucius cookie? what a choice?

LOVED the Phelan and Daisy interaction....dear lord that boy is going to be a heck of a man...their relationship is parallel to Lucius/Hermione but so much more "innocent".

Chapter 32: Our Phelan certainly has the makings of a prime stud. Daisy is concerned for her waistline, but perhaps Phelan likes a little cushioning

Lucius is such a sexy beast. Ron on the other hand....I have never read a story where Ron would be able to recognize when a woman has an orgasm if his life depended on it! lol Update soon!

Once again, dearest, you haven't disappointed!! I ADORE the little interaction with Phelan and Daisy...pure 'innocence' at it's finest! Update again soon, won't you? It makes my day when I see that you've updated. ^___^