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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More, More, MORE!!! Loved the update! Seriously...you must write longer chapters. Because when I start reading one, I find myself dreading reaching the end of one!

I eagerly await the next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Fenrir gets whats coming to him.
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
45 - 50 chapters ... good, because I can see a lot more of it coming. :-) Kingsley shaking Phelan's hand made me smile, Hermione's reaction to the other women, but not noticing the men's looks at her was so spot on! And, Lucius' "That's the way I roll," made me laugh out loud! Thank you so much for the giggle. HG4eva
person alina290
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this chapter. The costumes look nice. It is good when you get to have the body to be able to wear something like that. I am not liking that Greyback is going to do. He will ruin everything for Phelan.
Liz
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing.
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought chapter 34 was great..I hope that Lucius and Hermione will get married eventually in this

Please add ch 35 soon
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A perfect title, a lovely update, great costumes, and the blush of first love... wonderful! Fenrir and crew...$@%@^%$^#@^@#%! Looking forward to more really soon. :-) Sorry you only got 4 reviews, but I am sure people are still reading and enjoying. I know I am! HG4eva
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 34: The Malfoy contingent is going to the ball as a bunch of fairies. Or is that a gaggle of fairies? I never could keep those group things straight. Lucius is about as far from a fairy as one can get, but I
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I'm not all that regular with my reviews--I locked up the manticore, didn't I? Sorry: been working sixteen hours days lately and barely managing to keep up with my favorite stories. I do love the way you've set the scene: party-goers below, monsters above, and poor Phelan in the middle. Here's hoping Hermione's aim hasn't deteriorated over the years.
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, as usual, love. Fantastic job. I honestly can't wait to check every day and see if you've updated and it just puts a HUGE smile on my face when you do! Keep up the great work!!