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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay - I've been reading but not reviewing .... RL is nuts....now WTF?? Mother Moon? You got me confused Diva! CONFUSED! I know Daisy is scared but she seemed OCC from how you've presented her. Where's that spark and fearlessness we love? I also can't believe Ian is stronger than our lovely Hermione.....I'm on the edge of my seat.....the future is "unseen"....LOL! Get it? Get it? Sorry. :-)
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely little twist there in the end. :-) You had me twice! I first thought Hermione was going to break through and then Lucius, but nooooo. You had to let that darn shield hold. lol Come on Mother Moon! Give Phelan whatever it is he needs to finally end the reign of Greyback!! Thanks, hon. HG4eva
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice i just found your story! its so awesome! the relationships of lumione and phelan and daisy its so cool. And the twist of the mother moon is very interesting. really really really interesting. I hope that greyback dies though sorry i don't like him. i like phelan though lol. can't wait for your next update
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hhhmmm...intruiging. I love the Mother Moon concept. As for Fenrir, Phelan needs to overthrow him and become Alpha male...or create his own pack. Love that Daisy is standing up to Fenrir and that Phelan is so angry about his father manhandling her. But why doesn't Daisy call on some of her powers? Surely there's something she could do?

LOVELY update, dearest and I eagerly await the next chapter!
person Atrumnex
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG no u cant stop there. What is wrong with you? Why would you do something so horrible to me?PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ update.
person alina290
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I finally read it. I thought for sure it was going to be worse that how you made it. In I way I was sort of scared before reading the chapter. Now I am wondering what he is going to do to Phelan.
Liz
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a GREAT story!!! I'm sorry it took so long for me to tune in...but by golly I am here for good now. You hooked me from the first chapter and I couldn't stop reading!!! Sorry, didn't mean to yell at you...lol...but it is exciting to find such an intelligently written tale with humor, romance and intrigue that hooks me so thoroughly from the start. I hope that you have considered making writing a career choice, I think that with some training you could be a best-seller.

Herves Vuin
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 35: A happy evening of dancing and music was too much to hope for, without someone interfering. I knew Fenrir was going to disrupt the ball from the last chapter. I didn
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great cliffie, ok who comes to the rescue? There is so many possibilities!.....
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Phew my goodness this just get more intricate as the chapter go by! Keeps a girl's heart beating in interest I dare say!

I really am more and more drawn in with each chapter! Especialy those smut chapter....my goodness...who knew Hermione would be so wild! Wow.
I can't wait to see what happens. I hope Phelan isn't too badly injured and I sincerely hope nothing happens to Daisy. I'm curious though if you'll make it that easy.

Awaiting your next chapter impatiently,

Cheers!
distinctlyME