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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kids! What the devil's wrong with these kids today?! Sorry, musical reference. lol But, honestly, that was so perfect on your part, having them be "married" by mistake. So perfect and utterly hysterical all around. Poor Lucius...he is now related to that "flea bitten mongrel." ha ha ha I can't wait to read more. Thanks and happy holidays! HG4eva
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do so love this story. And I understand what you mean about Bludgers at work. I used to be a manager at a fast food joint and I'd only ever had a sick day once -- When I was vomiting every few minutes. I lost about 10kgs that weekend, but bcoz my boss didnt like me, she tried to counsel me over it. Yeah, she got into shit from our area manager. :)
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 36: Ooh, I like that Lucius can draw such power to himself, but in this case he
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 37: Mother Moon gives Phelan the info he needs to defend Daisy. Lucius and Hermione combining their magic will have exciting results, I
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 38: Daisy is now Mrs. Phelan Greyback I assume. Will she (or Lucius) ever find out that Phelan almost killed her with the fire in the forest? I suppose they will be happy together, even if they are both verrrrry young to be married. I guess the bonding ceremony doesn
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an unseen occurrence (I've decided I shall ensure to drop a hint and work it into each review)....! WOW - bound by blood. Goodness, I wanted to bop Lucius on his bonny head -- honestly, Phelan has more than proven himself. And Daisy loves him! Lord, the man's an idiot -- can he not see? Is all unseen?

Great update. Will you fast forward a few years? Mayhap another lovely session between Lucius and Hermione? *pant pant*
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*smiles broadly*

I had thought of something along the same lines as your blood bonding thing when I was writing "Shoulda Been A Slytherin". It's on my profile, if you'd like to take a look, but it's certainly not my best.


Love, love LOVE the update!!! Best Christmas present yet! ^___^
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Cherokee Malfoy and the Werewolf Prince? Is Lucius nuts? He's got an excellent chance at some seriously good PR going on and he's upset? Silly Wizard. The kid took down Greyback, even if inexperience left the job unfinished (at least he didn't have to kill his own father) He's a hero, she's pretty, and what's to freak about? Happy Xmas!
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome! that was a twist that i would never have thought to have thought of. Phelan and Daisy MARRIED!?!!! omg. that was an awesome twist. i loved it. i also loved that Lucius was reluctant to accept this relationship. I wonder what will happen when Phelan and Daisy see each other again. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was soooooooooo sweet!!!!!!! Love it! More please~~!