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I had such a hard choice tonight. AFF had three of my favorites stories updated. It is late well over my bedtime and I know I checked yesterday to see if there were any updates and there weren't. Today it turned out that these three stories had been updated on the fourth and I know I checked. Well I have been so looking forward to read what comes next here that yours was the one I read first and last for tonight before going to sleep. Have you read "Beautiful Disaster" by ashleyfanfic? If you have not, start reading it. It is really good and it is one of the first stories that started me reading fan-fiction. Okay on with my review, for a moment there I thought that maybe Lucius was going to think that Phelan had done that to his son. I feel much relief that Draco was able to talk a little about his beating.
Liz

Just when you think you know what's happening and everything is wrapped up...BAM and unseen force hits you over the head and you knock the wind out of us. WOW - talk about blind...I mean unseen-sided!

I just found this story on Monday. I love it! Keep up the good work. I won't crtitique your punctuation (if you don critique my spelling - addicted to spell check!), but may occasionally critique style.

It's a good read and keeps me tagging along for the ride. Draco, Lucius and Severus are my favorites to work with. I love the bad boys who are at heart good men. Always felt like Harry was a potrayed a bit too "goody-two-shoes" and Ron was a bit too vanilla - with 5 older brothers he would not have been that innocent and naive. Maybe a Harry and Draco paring (They have been through some serious shit together, opposite sides, but still experiencing it together)? It would add to the oddity that has become Lucius' life. A threesome with 'Mionie/Lucius/Severus? Is she pregnant?

Keep it up! - GR

Hm, sounds like Draco ran into a whole posse of overprotective males during an assignation. Squee! Loved the idea of Phelan doing the 'Lassie rescue routine' LOL!!

Hey my other love (Draco) reappears, we can have so much fun with him.......... or mix and match again with Hermione and Lucius...... hey sky is the limit and let the imagination run wild......LOL

That was sweet, nice and touching, as well as funny and surprising. I can't wait to see Lucius's reaction to all these wonderful changes in his life. The poor man is going to need a long vacation soon. ha ha ha Thanks! HG4eva

Okay, first: I LOVE the way Daisy spends time "scratching that special spot" behind Phelan's ears when he turns into werewolf form. TOO CUTE! Second: Fantastic way to bring Drakey-poo back into the story. Marvelous! Third: Brilliant how you described the softness of Phelan's fur when Hermione petted him. Fourth: Phelan's thought process while in wolf form is fizzucking HILARIOUS! <3 him. And finally: Lucius and Phelan's interaction never ceases to amuse the hell outta me!


Fantastic update, darling! Can't WAIT til the next!

Why am I getting the feeling Draco's about to muck it up for someone?

Wow. Wasnt expecting him. I thought it was going to be some random werewolf hunter after Phelan. It was goo tho. There are obviously going to be fights about Hermione, Phelan and Daisy being in the house. :)

Chapter 39: Lucius will now have to make do with Phelan in Daisy