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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens with unseen drama. Well, Draco is a prat - I think he needs a bit of Margarita lovin' - oh yeah baby....Pansy indeed, she's...well...a pansy! Love Lucius possessiveness and Hermione's clear love for him.

Poor Daisy - nervous and afraid of the unseen, of going to boarding school...hopefully Hermione will see it and help her allay those fears. Phelan - in Hogwarts....YEAH. Protecting his girl. OH YEAH. Love this unexpected....er...unseen....plot.
person Jenn
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOl! I laughed so hard at what Hermione said to Draco about his father. That was great! I love the interaction between Daisy and Phelan, they always make me laugh and are great together. Great chapter! I'm always looking forward to updates on this story! Keep up the awesome work!
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well this jive turkey has a few verbs to lay on you. hip....groovy....farout. in other words the chapter was neato. LOL.
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Lay some verbs and adjectives on me..." Thanks for that giggle Well, let's see if I can oblige...

Verbs - giggle, snort, sneer (at Draco), roll ones eyes, ponder, wonder
Adjectives - funny, lovely, interesting, snarky, perfect

Thanks! HG4eva
person hairsprayX12
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, geez, I can only imagine the trouble Daisy and Phelan will get into at Hogwarts...lol...on Lucius what were you thinking?

I get the feeling Draco and Harry are about to collide?
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very intresting ...... there is more to come!!!!!!!
person Tanya
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the relationship that daisy and phelan have it's very innocent yet just the right amount of maturity to make it last
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 41: I suppose if a werewolf retained his consciousness during a transformation, a relationship would be easier (especially if one likes dogs). Oh dear, with Phelan
person Serranna
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Boy o boy, Hermione's fantasy was Hot Hot Hot!!!

Great story. I absolutely love Lucius' dry sense of humor and the difference between what he's thinking and what he actually says.

Good thing I don't require batteries. Shouldn't every good witch own a magic wand? ;D

(might be a double post---my computer's wonky)
person Jenn
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it :D the last chapter also! hehe loved the hermione/lucious scene, very hott! great job! can't wait for more