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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

person Anna
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hermione must be pregnant!!!!
I really enjoy this story it's funny and sweet and everything that is necessary for a good fic.
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm back!! I am so happy to be able to type with two hands, even though my shoulder is still killing me. I was sorry I couldn't review the last chapter because the lemon was yummy and the Draco scene illuminating. It's sad to see how hurt and angry he still is. I long for the day he grows up and learns that it's time to move on from his past. I even believe there will be a day when he apologizes to Hermione for all the childish name-calling and terrorizing he's done. Now, on to this chapter...

I wanted to jump into the story and hug both Cole and Severus. I can only imagine how awful it must have been to see his own memories mirrored in the mind of a child, especially his own. I am really glad you are making him out to be a god father. And, I hope you find a way to get his revenge on the #@$#$@%@$ that hurt Cole into the story. Then Draco again... I guess that growing up isn't happening any time soon. lol and sigh... Phelan and Daisy are so sweet together. I love young love and you write it beautifully. Thank you!

Last, I sure hope Hermione can find a potion to help her get rid of that stomach flu. I know I absolutely hate being sick and with... KIDDING! lol This is such "good" timing. Not. lol I look forward to seeing how long it takes for her to figure it out, how Lucius reacts to finding out, and how angry jerkoff, er, I mean, big brother expresses his "joy."

Thank you!! As always, I look forward to more soon!
HG4eva
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you just keep tantalizing us with unseen little snippets of what's to come...you minx. Hermione's preggers and I can't wait for Draco to find out. Oh and I love Phelan calling Daisy his wife-ling. SO SWEET.

schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry i missed the last chapter! Ive been crazy busy w work, and then im too tired to do much of anything when I get home.

Is Hermione Preggers?
person forsaken_dream
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is Hermione by any chance pregnant?? Thats the inpression I'm getting anyway :)
person jraskin
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chappie was great!Please update again soon!
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is getting intresting.... a pregnancy!!!!!! Lovely and Phelan and Daisy...... even more.... Keep them coming.
person hairsprayX12
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Daisy and Phelan are too cute. Can't to see what all they get up to at Hogwarts. I sense trouble...lol...

Someone is going to get a beat down once Severus figures out who they are. Poor little Cole, his mom was an airhead...grrr...

Oh my goodness, Draco is such a pill. I'm still waiting for the inevitable confrontation between him and Harry (is hopeful)

So, pregnancy or is someone trying to harm Hermione? You aren't going to tell me are you?

So that only leaves...UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!!
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I simply adore Snape's interactions with his son...so sweet!!

As for Draco, I rather wish he would take a long walk off a short pier. *big grin*

Mmmm...upset tummy, eh? very interesting indeed.


More, please! ^___^
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I'm baaackk!!!! Mwahahaha!!!


Anyway, now that my random evil moment is over. Loved the Chapter! Can't wait to hear what I already know!!!! I smell babies!!!!!

Want to see Draco get his snooty due!

lol And I can't wait to see our mini duo hit Hogwarts and terrorize those magical folk!!!


Lady Serin