rate_review Reviews

Ugh!!!! I love this story!!! Keep going, don't finish too quick....please!

Oh Wizard God... Will Serena be a werewolf now? And, Daisy was raped... I do hope you'll make everyone okay - because okay is wonderful.

Oh, I forgot to mention in my previous review how much I adore all the AVPM/AVPS references. They certainly were giggle-worthy.

You are a HORRIBLE PERSON!! GAH! Leaving the chappie like that? Poor Daisy and poor Serena and poor Fawkes! (And mini-Daisy better not be hurt in there... :( Evil, trauma-making author!!)

The circs suck, but I have to say, there's a little anti-feminist, squirmy, dirty core deep inside me that is completely melting over the idea of Sirius, Remus, Severus and Lucius, charging into battle all alpha-male and out-for-blood to save their women... Granted, Daisy's like a kid to most of them, but still, those four in battle-mode? Rowr. (Plus your Tom and Phelan... equally rowr in my mind. ^_^)

Looking forward to more!!!

No, no NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

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Just wanted to let you know that I have been enjoying your story. Lucius/Hermione can be difficult to keep in character, but you have done it well. Also, you have created some OCs that are likeable without being Mary Sues. I am curious to know how Daisy and Serena fair. Oh, and I loved the La Bib reference. Awaiting the next chapter!

SO......I started reading this story about a week ago, reading a little each night. I was enthralled. I have to say there were couple chapters that lost my interest, but that is not your writing it was just more interested in the other parts of the story haha. I love this story so much. && I can't believe how much thought you have pout into it. Great job! && I really am waiting for the next chapter to come out asap!!!!!!

Thank so much for this chapter. I am glad to read what Tom decided to do. I wish someone would draw a picture of him and his snakes.

Liz

Even without knowing that Lucius was a deatheater, I would have be petrified by the way acted. Probably not a smart idea to return to the centaurs because they will know how to get to their camp. Hopefully Lucius will soon see through Draco's crap and call him on it. reading on... p

Ewwww, a toddler. Severus better watch that mouth or he will have it played back to him by his son. That would be hysterical. I kind of want Daisy to stay with the centaurs. Even though they are not human, they are more like Daisy than her relatives are. Notice that Lucius immediately blames Hermione just so that he will have someone to yell at? p