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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The fact that you had trouble with this chapter certainly didn't show. Both letters were perfect. Daisy's was as expected and her anxiety leaped off the page. Phelan's was a pleasant and touching surprise. Lucius' pride in his young cousin and new stance on Werewolf rights was nice and funny, respectively. Draco's entrance was also a bit of a surprise, but as usual, he acted the ass. Sigh... And, Hermione's tantrum...preggers! lol
Thanks! HG4eva
Thanks! HG4eva
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww! How sweet! The letters were perfect! And the Draco incident was just right.
I smell a half-blood Malfoy in the tummy of Hermione!
Any way, sorry to make this short, but I'm sleepy.
Lady Serin
I smell a half-blood Malfoy in the tummy of Hermione!
Any way, sorry to make this short, but I'm sleepy.
Lady Serin
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh they will have a big surprise coming from Hermione! Phelan have the ability to feel new life as well......... Wonderful!!!!!!!!!! More More More
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WELL - so many unseen circumstances for Lucius in this chapter: his love for his witch, impending daddy-hood (which is unseen to all), Phelan's acceptance into Hogwarts, he and Daisy's co-habitation and Draco's strange "acceptance."
Love it.
Love it.
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter.I think Hermione may be in a family way.Draco is still an ass.I am so glad that both the kids will be going to school.
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The idea of Lucius trying to give 'the talk' to his cousin and a teenage werewolf alpha almost had my face cracking from the idoit's grin I was sporting! At least Draco came down to eat.
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. Love me some Phelan. He's quickly becoming my favorite character, he is! Lovely update, darling and I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter!
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good! As always! You make me growl and want to scream with the teaser short chapters!!! But then, I'm not sure 20,000 words would be enough either! Just keep moving along, please. PLEASE!!!
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol...sex ed.
Oh wow...you went there...Draco will implode if Herms is pregnant
Oh wow...you went there...Draco will implode if Herms is pregnant
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well it seems like their might be a bun in the oven. who would have thought that she might get careless, of course this is just my assumption. Thank you so much for the chapter. Keep up the good work.
Liz
Liz