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for Just Around the Riverbend

by Kooldragon400

schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it and we will be here for the long ride!!!!!! LOL
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pobre Phelan! I just wanted to kick that restaurant owner's arse.
Draco is a douche.
Hermione is being a cheeky little monkey, isn't she? Those pregnancy hormones kicking in I suppose. ;)
*points to self* thinks Phelan and Daisy are cute too. ^___^
Update soon, darling. It makes my day!
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hello,

draco isn't reformed yet, but i hope it happens soon. thanks for posting again and i can't wait to see how things go. Phelan needs to learn that no man is an island.
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Phelan. I don't know who that man was, but I sincerely hope Hermione is the one to put him in his place. Having her do it will make more of an impression, as she isn't to blame for any of the man's issues, plus she helped "save" them all. I think a boycott of the premises is right up her alley. How dare he?! Arse! I hope Daisy can calm him down enough to let him see that not everyone will act that way. At least I hope they don't. Sigh...

But, I am REALLY glad to know the story is no where near over. Yay for me. :-) Thanks, luv! HG4eva
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like muffin tops.....now i want a blueberry muffin. anyway good chapter.
person gypsy
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, okay (huffing impatiently)! I understand, I must give kudos to get more kibbles.
Well done! (AS ALWAYS!)
Is Draco going to come around? How's Luc going to react to Hermione being pregnant? She is, isn't she? More importantly, HOW IS DRACO GOING TO REACT! (Handle them with care, please. I never outgrew my love for the bad boys!) Daisy needs to be the one to put Draco in his place. Soundly, so there can be no doubt in his mind that she is worthy of Luc's attentions. Could we have a scene where Draco becomes aware of exactly what Hermione means to his father? Overhearing or seeing them? I don't expect Happy-Happy-Joy-Joy horse hooey, but at least acceptance reather than the strained tolerance he is enduring and inflicting upon everyone. Maybe Hermione and Luc can help him understand his own demons that are haunting him - something he had to do during his Death Eater days?

Now, MORE PLEASE?!!! (Oh yeah! Keep up the good work!)
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Me thinks Phelan is having emotional issues and self confidence issues. Perhaps their should be a bit of an intervention before Hogwarts begins or it might get messy.

And I swear Hermione is preggers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know it!!!!!!


lol great chappy, can't wait for the next one! Post soon!!!


Lady Serin
person Citten
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you did great on the letters!!! i really loved it. well well what is up with our hermione? ;) you knotty girl! i have a guess but i want you to tell it cause if i say it and i am wrong i will be sad! so i do hope that you have the next chapter coming and really soon too!!!! i am dying to find out what is up next!!! :) dear lucius he handled that suituation well and i love how he knows that she has him wrapped around his finger! too cute! :) post soon, PLEASE!
person MsPersephone
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVEEEEE this story!
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm excited for hermione to figure out she's knocked up. lol. i really liked the chapter as well.